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#1 Before February 2015

michaewlewis
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The Pits

Here is my first medium level: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWyXtpWsXZa0I

Designed to be easy enough to be quick and fun.
Interested in advice/critique.

#2 Before February 2015

Shy Guy
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Re: The Pits

A bit annoying and repetitive. It was all just a small noob world to basically put it.

#3 Before February 2015

AcellOfllSpades
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Re: The Pits

The minigames are poorly designed. Sorry, but half of the level was hookjumps. The stairs were easily trollable so nobody could get up, there were complete timewasters for a lot of the level, and then there was a suicide coin at the end of a hookjump tower.My advice would be to clear the level and start making minigames that aren't in every other noob level in EE.

#4 Before February 2015

michaewlewis
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Re: The Pits

Let me rephrase myself. I'm interested in helpful advice/critique. I'm not sure how to make better worlds with comments like "it's just another noob world". But I'll give you both a +rep for testing my level anyways. Thanks.

#5 Before February 2015

Shy Guy
Guest

Re: The Pits

Well, if you're not good at art or such, the least you could do is make original minigames. No hookjumps is a start.

#6 Before February 2015

michaewlewis
Guest

Re: The Pits

Got it. Just got rid of most of them. Also got rid of the first four pits. I've got an idea to replace them, but not sure how it will pan out.

#7 Before February 2015

supadorf24
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Joined: 2015-02-26
Posts: 2,675

Re: The Pits

Well, I'm glad you're asking for advice. It's a good quality to have. I think the main problem with this map is that it's not special in any way. The minis were all very easy and involved just jumping and collecting coins. There really wasn't a challenge. Some of the challenges we're fun, like the ones with arrows. But overall the level just lacked fun.

One way to improve your minis is to make some art or even just some random shapes. Then try to fit minis inside whatever you created. Unless you drew a boring square, the minis you made are bound to be at least somewhat interesting. Ditch the boxes.

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#8 Before February 2015

michaewlewis
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Re: The Pits

Cleared the level and went with a racing level. It can only be fun if there are multiple people on the level, though. If I ever get some coin locks, I can make the level longer.....

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