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Re: Luka's Oficialy Unofficial Reviews

Why Ck and Unau didn't submit. also Derps's team's world is cool but the minigame is just... a bit horrible. gl lol

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Joined: 2016-11-18

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Re: Luka's Oficialy Unofficial Reviews

▼Radioactive Sunflowers

Story - 2/10
Your forest is under attack, and you play as an animal with your goal being to defend the forest before it gets destroyed. By itself the story is okay, but most of these signs felt very... cringy to me. Like a child trying to plagiarize the way pingohits writes his stories, but does a sad job.

Art - 5/10
This art is perfectly average. There's nothing particularly bad about, but nothing special about it either.

Concept - 8/10
You are able to play as multiple characters who each play slightly differently one from another. It's a pretty good idea and gives the world a bit of replayability.

Gameplay - 4/10
You can play as multiple critters, which sounds nice, but since there's so little variation between them it's kind of redundant. I would have much prefered one playthrough that was really good rather than five mediocre playthroughs. Most of the minigames felt very bland and unoriginal.

52/100

Other notes: It's kind of a shame that you've improved for the last two rounds and made some nice worlds, only for you to drop back down to an 50/100 score. Oh well..

Well, they do have different paths.

All else I can say is the world has as much likes and favs as freezy bake, at 2/3s of the plays of it, so shrug.

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