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CommanderKitten

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From: California

Joined: 2015-12-12

Posts: 66

Mountain Pass

So this is my first world I've completed solo, and it took a long time to make. It is purely visual, and there isn't much to do in it. Any critiques on it is much appreciated! This is also my first topic so sorry if I did anything wrong.

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Link: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWKmJjpelNb0I
Beta: http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWKmJjpelNb0I

Abelysk

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Re: Mountain Pass

Love it. +1 rep

Unau

Member

From: over there

Joined: 2015-08-10

Posts: 499

Re: Mountain Pass

it looks bootyful bb <3

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thanks koya

Kira

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Re: Mountain Pass

So this is my first world I've completed solo, and it took a long time to make. It is purely visual, and there isn't much to do in it. Any critiques on it is much appreciated! This is also my first topic so sorry if I did anything wrong.

Minimap:

Link: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWKmJjpelNb0I
Beta: http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWKmJjpelNb0I

It feels like your weeping willows are a bit off the style of art, either way it's nice!

CommanderKitten

Member

From: California

Joined: 2015-12-12

Posts: 66

Re: Mountain Pass

So this is my first world I've completed solo, and it took a long time to make. It is purely visual, and there isn't much to do in it. Any critiques on it is much appreciated! This is also my first topic so sorry if I did anything wrong.

Minimap:

Link: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWKmJjpelNb0I
Beta: http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWKmJjpelNb0I

It feels like your weeping willows are a bit off the style of art, either way it's nice!

Yeah, they were the first thing I made in the world. After that I kinda changed my style, but I left the willows in because I wasn't sure how to redo them. Thanks for the feedback!

Pingohits

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From: aids lizard

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 7,591

Re: Mountain Pass

my fetish

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RavaTroll

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From: France

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 820

Re: Mountain Pass

Awesome

there's something weird about the 3d but it works
wouldn't be able to tell what's weird tho

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Trolls be in da place, mon !

SilverStar

EE Homegirl

Joined: 2015-07-01

Posts: 541

Re: Mountain Pass

It looks fantastic - I am especially impressed with the birch trees (I'm sorry if that's not what they are - I'm horrible with knowing white bark trees). The colors look amazing!

I think I know what looks weird about the 3d - it's that there is a foreground and big mountains in the distance, but there is no middle ground, or ground sloping up to the mountains. Or maybe it's that the tree line is horizontal instead of slanted and it's hard to tell the distance of the pines.

I hope this is helpful, although I'm not confident it is - I just confused myself more!

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