The EE Fan: A story (Ch2 Act1: Ep3 of 5)

Michele · 2015-03-22 10:46:30

The story starts. Wait as I create this.

Start!

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It's 9:20PM here, 10 characters are waiting. Three talked on the bus, and we're going to the station. You're going need to prepare before you go.

"I need to prepare before I can go to station to go to EE World" 20feedy said.
"Yeah" Onjit said.
"I'm not doing that!" Reidolol joked.

These ten arrived at the station, there is a train waiting for you.
"Nice train" Pingohits said.
"Hello there, I will take you to EE World. Please prepare smilies and blocks" the train said.

Everyone was prepared. Daneeko had the teddy bear also.
The train started to take to EE World.

"Ooooh, a peaceful day" Anch159 said.
Before Anch159 ask any thing to 20feedy, a strange man appeared.
"I think it's my friend" 20feedy said.
An strange man revealed to be Tom12401.

"AHHHHHH" Pingohits said running away. But Reidolol stop Pingohits from running away.
"Don't be so scary" Reidolol said.
Pingohits taken a deep breathe to stop.
"Let's go to my house" Tom12401 said.

All goes to Tom12401's home. It's extrementely big, VERY big.
It has 11 beds, 13 robot on house, 1 guard robot, 2 cooker robot to cook things, 2 robot who can put things in order, 3 robot who can clean things.
There's many computer for work, 5 robot are master worker. In the option, it's VERY PERFECT place with great things like TV with resolution HD, many Wii and DS games inculding Wii U and Nintendo 3DS. 183915 peoples already visited this. It was for 1 month, the first day was 88491 visits.

":O" Pingohits said.
Everyone voted as "Perfect house" expect Pingohits which rates "Flawless house", a more tier of "Perfect house".
20feedy checked the time.
It's 10:05 PM.
All robot are sleeping. Everyone goes to sleep, and Tom said a last word: It has great security system to prevent ninjas and robbers, there's also a jail. 134 peoples are in jail.
Sleeping, you...

TO BE CONTINUED

Ch 1 Act 1, continuing.

While you sleep, you suddentely realize...

ALARM ALARM ALARM ALARM ALARM ALARM

Everyone woke up, it's 9:11 AM now.

"What's wrong?" Pingohits said, realizing Skullz was here.
"OH?!" Skullz said, thinking there's a robber.
All robot was awake.

"What's wrong with my house?!" ROBOT 1 said.
"We must call a guard robot!" ROBOT 2 said.

Everyone call the guard robot. He then, using his master ability, tries to find a robot solo, but couldn't find him.
Everyone tries to do group.

Skullz and Pingohits gone up and found nothing, 20feedy looked down and nothing, Bill33 to cooking room and nothing, and FINALLY!
Reidolol was so lucky that he found a robber! Fortunately, he's the fast one that have managed to CATCH the robber.

Tom found a robber, he looked and it was a...

A FAIRY!

Everyone suprised.
"A fairy?!" 20feedy said.
"I don't remember anything..." A fairy said.
"It's the name Ada!" Reidolol said, happy to see a old friend.
"Ada? Is this my name?" Ada said.
"You don't remember anything?" Reidolol questioned.

Reidolol explained how Ada is a old friend.

"Oh! I remember everything!" Ada said.
"Can you be able to use magic?" Pingohits said.
"Yes! I can use magics!" Ada said, happily.
"WHOA" everyone said.
"I can use magic but I'm not using magics. My magic wand told me that will be unstable if I use too much magics" Ada said.
BONK BONK BONK

There is someone who tries to "BONK" the door. 20feedy opens it, and see:
2 guardians
A moderator

These 2 guardians welcomed, it called Master1 and Thanel
And one moderator was called Jawapa.

They said: "Hello, do you want to invite you to a party world?"
20feedy said: "Yeah, but what world is it?"

Jawapa said: "Oh look, a fairy!"
20feedy said: "Yeah, he's a fairy, her name is Ada and he can use magics."

Thanel said on respond to "Which world":
"The world is called BombBot. It had 88 player online of 100. It's almost full so QUICK!"
20feedy said quicky: "Oh! My favorite world!"

20feedy ran away to world: BombBot.

TO BE CONTINUED

Act 2 here.

As everyone went to BombBot, everyone had a great party.

"Let's party!" 20feedy said.
"With me!" Drstereos said.
"Yay, party!" Ada said.

But unill then, the room has 100 players and is blacking out. Everyone close the eyes... Also peoples...

The world is crumbing into piece.

After everyone opens the eyes, it turned out a shattered world in a black room, with no name and owner.

"WTF?!?!" peoples and everyone said.
"What the hey is this?!" Ada said.

I think it is messed up...
The BLACK PC appears!

"Hello" 20feedy said.

But the black PC raged:
-> He banned reidolol!

And so he injured drstereos using a 10 slaps!
20feedy turns to rage out for banning reidolol, a friend, and he kick out but he get froze!

Pingohits used the BEAM LASER to kill the Black PC. After he is killed (PC), it turns a another guardian, Ultrabass, and 3 mod, NVD, Toop and Processor!

NVD said: Hey!

20feedy was froze that he cound'nt reply to NVD so he cured it.

"Why I am froze?" 20feedy said. "My friend was banned by mistake by a black PC!"
"Which friend?" NVD said.
"Reidolol" 20feedy said.

So he unban reidolol as a try, but couldn't do it.
"I can't" NVD said. "Maybe next time."
"Oh." 20feedy said.

Then the world unblacked, and it is now called BombBot by Thanel!

All peoples was now happy and 20feedy is a hero! He got: Superman Smiley!

"Ohh, superman smiley!" 20feedy thanked.

"It turns out drstereos is injured... I'll try to cure him." Jawapa said.
"Let's make more players play EE! And we're fun!" Toop said.

TO BE CONTINUED

Now act 3!

Reidolol was unbanned now.

"Why I am banned?" said Reidolol.

Drstereos was cured now.

Everyone (peoples and characters) said: "WE NEED PARTY!"

"Yes! We have made a world portal that adventures you endless worlds!" Thanel and Ultrabass said.

"We must prepare items..." said 20feedy.

Daneeko come back to here.
"Oh... Sorry I was late..... What did I miss??" Daneeko said.

Everyone was prepared. Items... So every 1 is excited about it. Then, 150 more peoples joined and it's NOW 250.
Let's enter the world!

TO BE CONTINUED (sorry for short story I'll make a bit longer next time)

CHAPTER 2 HAS BEEN RELEASED!

Everyone enter the portal. An endless journey and destiny is starting.
You got warped to PIXEL WORLD: SUPER MARIO BROS

"What is exactly the place?" 20feedy said.
"I don't know" Onijt said.

Mario appears...

"Who are you! Intruder!" 20feedy said.
"I'm Mario!" Mario said.

20feedy doesn't care and jump on head of Mario, and he fell.
"Whatever" said 20feedy.
Moving on...

You see the castle.

"I don't think it's good" Reidolol thinked.
"Let's move on" 20feedy said.

Everyone enter the castle.

The door closes!

BWAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

"Uh...?" 20feedy said.
Then the fire come out and hit feedy.

20feedy fell out!

You lose a live!
Lives: x50
Then he respawned.

"What?!" 20feedy said.
You see a pipe.

"What is it?" 20feedy said.
"It's a pipe... uh... IDK..." Pingohits said.
"Yes! A pipe!" Drstereos said.

You used it.
Everyone get throwed to up... You see a red, big door.

Everyone enter it.

You fell into a strange man!

"BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA I'll FIRE YOU" Bowser said.

"What the hey is it?!" 20feedy said.
Fire appear, but everyone immentiately jumped to not lose a life.

"GAH" Bowser said.
20feedy arrived at a button with skull, to drop a bridge.
He uses the rope to come everyone, then he hit the button.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" BOWSER SAID

Everyone progressed, and see Peach...
Peach kisses 20feedy.

"Thanks you, 20feedy."

TO BE CONTINUED

EPISODE 2 HAS BEEN UNLEASHED!

After defeating Bowser, you see a portal. It unintendedely warps everyone to a WORLD NAME: EE Pac-Man by No Owner

"What is place about it?!?!" 20feedy said.
"It's ABOUT Pac-man" Daneeko said.
"lel" Reidolol laughed.

The race is about to start. There's a intervall: sit down on lobby.
"Hmm..."

The race is starting in:
5
4
3
2
1
START
38 are racer which started to run the bike.

"Okay!" drstereos and Pingohits said.
WARNING: There's a earthquake!

"What an ****-hole" 20feedy said.
Everyone jumped. 7 racer died.

As you progress...
WARNING: Pac-man is about to eat racers! Watch out!

"What the **** is that?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!" 20feedy said.
And so Anch159, Zumza and 9 other guests racer died because it was eaten at world 1...

WORLD 1 HAS A BOSS! FIGHT NOW!

The tree man appears.
"-,,,-"
With the ability, the tree man try to swallow some racer, some died.

All other racer hits the tree man.

1000 - 750 = 250

The TREE MAN RAGES!
With the rage ability,, should's he created some apples. 1 racer knocked out.

All other racer kill the tree man.
Congratulation! - the horn said.

Next's up: World 2 of 3

Get ready...
"Get ready as anch and zumza has died. He will revive in world 3!" said 20feedy.

TO BE CONTINUED

EPISODE 3 HAS BEEN UNLEASHED!

"Now's starting!" the horn said.

It started...

"QUICKSAND?!?!?! Watch out!!" the horn said.

Everyone survived expect for Drstereos, which died on quicksand. Some other guests died.

"Get ready for boss!"

The worm appear...

HP: 2500

With one time, 20feedy became a superman and killed the worm!

Congrats! Finished!

World 3/3 now, doing a interval.
"Get ready again!" 20feedy said.

TO BE CONTINUED

EPISODE 4 HAS BEEN UNLEASHED!

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- the horn said.

"What?!!" 20feedy and Daneeko said.

ERROR. ERROR. ERROR. ERROR.

WTF?!

THE HORN MANAGED TO TRASPORT TO SOMEWHERE ELSE!

"Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?!?!?!?!?!?!?!"

TO BE CONTINUED

Michele · 2015-03-22 10:48:33

It is not a double post as it's a character list.

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daneeko · 2015-03-22 13:04:19

Question: Can i have my name non-EE (like onjit's one, awzome signed up with the name "duck", when his EE name is "awzome")?

Michele · 2015-03-22 15:31:53

Daneeko wrote:

Question: Can i have my name non-EE (like onjit's one, awzome signed up with the name "duck", when his EE name is "awzome")?

No

SPT · 2015-03-22 16:09:54

dont talk about my username i made it two years ago

Michele · 2015-03-22 17:37:02

Awzome wrote:

dont talk about my username i made it two years ago

Okay you're Duck in old EE. But remember the gender, personality and others.

Duck joined!

Bill33 and Zumza123 joined!

daneeko · 2015-03-22 17:41:23

Name: Daneeko
Gender: Male
Personality: Nice and creative, sometimes annoying and rarely tries to be jokish
Other: I like to draw EE.

Michele · 2015-03-22 17:42:38

Daneeko wrote:

Name: Daneeko
Gender: Male
Personality: Nice and creative, sometimes annoying and rarely tries to be jokish
Other: I like to draw EE.

Accepted. 2 more

SPT · 2015-03-22 17:53:05

i never had a username named duck
but i always wanted it

some woman · 2015-03-22 18:22:19

bro you're adding people to the character list who never even signed up
also i never got to talk
also who is tom12401

Zumza · 2015-03-22 18:51:45

I think this will not be a murder story...

skullz17 · 2015-03-22 19:28:02

":O" Pingohits said.

amazing

Michele, SPT

Zumza · 2015-03-22 20:45:07

he's a fairy, her name is Ada

Im not an expert in english but i understand from quote that the fairy is transexual

some woman · 2015-03-22 20:56:01

your oc (ada) is bad

Michele · 2015-03-22 21:33:20

some man wrote:

your oc (ada) is bad

It's not, why do you would expect to say that?!

Michele · 2015-03-22 21:50:29

ACT 2 has arrived. Will Reidolol be unbanned and drstereos cured? You can find it out a bit later!

some woman · 2015-03-22 21:54:52

how the story will probably end: 20feedy uses his super awesomeness powers to fuse with ada and become the coolest thing on the face of earth and destroy the villain. the other characters do not matter at all. the end.

SPT

Michele · 2015-03-22 21:55:22

some man wrote:

how the story will probably end: 20feedy uses his super awesomeness powers to fuse with ada and become the coolest thing on the face of earth and destroy the villain. the other characters do not matter at all. the end.

That's just infinity adventures.

SPT · 2015-03-22 22:27:50

some man wrote:

how the story will probably end: 20feedy uses his super awesomeness powers to fuse with ada and become the coolest thing on the face of earth and destroy the villain. the other characters do not matter at all. the end.

AntonioS3000 wrote:

All peoples was now happy and 20feedy is a hero! He got: Superman Smiley!
"Ohh, superman smiley!" 20feedy thanked.

some woman

Pingohits · 2015-03-22 23:33:00

i sound very ipwnery

pls change

skullz17 · 2015-03-22 23:38:22

what's going on with your pronouns

You fell into a strange man!

First, this is worded really strangely and sounds disgusting. Also, who are you even referring to? Who's 'you'?

SPT, Pingohits

some woman · 2015-03-22 23:53:21

AntonioS300 wrote:

20feedy arrived at a button with skull, to drop a bridge.
He uses the rope to come everyone, then he hit the button.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" BOWSER SAID
Everyone progressed, and see Peach...
Peach kisses 20feedy.
"Thanks you, 20feedy."

It seems like every other character in the entire story has no personality and is just filler to make it less boring. This story would be the exact same if you were the only person in it.

SPT, skullz17

Pingohits · 2015-03-23 00:03:08

skullz17 wrote:

what's going on with your pronouns
You fell into a strange man!
First, this is worded really strangely and sounds disgusting. Also, who are you even referring to? Who's 'you'?

holy crap i can't stop laughing
if i could woot this twice i would

BEST QUOTES FROM THE STORY

Everyone was prepared. Daneeko had the teddy bear also.

"Don't be so scary" Reidolol said.

Pingohits taken a deep breathe to stop.

":O" Pingohits said.

While you sleep, you suddentely realize...
ALARM ALARM ALARM ALARM ALARM ALARM

All robot was awake.

Tom found a robber, he looked and it was a...
A FAIRY!

"Ada? Is this my name?" Ada said.

"I can use magic but I'm not using magics. My magic wand told me that will be unstable if I use too much magics" Ada said.
BONK BONK BONK

The world is crumbing into piece.

And so he injured drstereos using a 10 slaps!

"Why I am froze?" 20feedy said. "My friend was banned by mistake by a black PC!"

Everyone get throwed to up...

You fell into a strange man!

"BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA I'll FIRE YOU" Bowser said.

He uses the rope to come everyone, then he hit the button.

"Thanks you, 20feedy."

some woman, Onjit, SPT

Onjit · 2015-03-23 03:40:34

"I can use magic but I'm not using magics. My magic wand told me that will be unstable if I use too much magics" Ada said.
BONK BONK BONK

some woman · 2015-03-23 13:08:57

I can't even tell what's going on in the newest story because of antonio's horrible grammar

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