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#1 Before February 2015

OrangeCrix
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Ebony (The complete story)

I got quite a lot of good reviews on my last thread so I decided I will post 1 chapter of the full story a day, replacing each chapter each post because of the character limit. If there is not a post a day, don't be upset. I am a very busy person and I do not have hours of my time to dedicate to editing out all the bad words in the explicit version of the story. I will also add author's notes before each chapter.

Oh, and if you can't tell, it's inspired by Harry Potter.

Warning: The following may not be suitable for that of the sane mind. Oh, and people below the age of 13.

Chapter 1.

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!

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Hi my name is Ebony Dark?ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that?s how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don?t know who she is get out of here!). I?m not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he?s a major hottie. I?m a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I?m also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I?m in the seventh year (I?m nineteen). I?m a goth (in case you couldn?t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me.

?Hey Ebony!? shouted a voice. I looked up. It was?. Draco Malfoy!

?What?s up Draco?? I asked.

?Nothing.? he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

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#2 Before February 2015

The Smirking Mage
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Re: Ebony (The complete story)

Ooh, much better,

1: Hogwarts is in Scotland
2: Seventh years are 18.

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