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Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

A man went to a hotel and walked up to the front desk to check in. The woman at the desk gave him his key and told him that on the way to his room, there was a door with no number that was locked and no one was allowed in there. Especially no one should look inside the room, under any circumstances. So he followed the instructions of the woman at the front desk, going straight to his room, and going to bed. The next night his curiosity would not leave him alone about the room with no number on the door. He walked down the hall to the door and tried the handle. Sure enough it was locked. He bent down and looked through the wide keyhole. Cold air passed through it, chilling his eye.

What he saw was a hotel bedroom, like his, and in the corner was a woman whose skin was completely white. She was leaning her head against the wall, facing away from the door. He stared in confusion for a while. He almost knocked on the door, out of curiosity, but decided not to. This saved his life. He crept away from the door and walked back to his room. The next day, he returned to the door and looked through the wide keyhole. This time, all he saw was red. He couldn?t make anything out besides a   red color,not moving. Perhaps the empty   room knew he was spying the night before, and had blocked the keyhole with something red.

At this point he decided to consult the woman at the front desk for more information. She sighed and said, "Did you look through the keyhole?" The man told her that he had and she said, "Well, I might as well tell you the story. A long time ago, a man murdered his wife in that room, and her ghost haunts it. But these people were not ordinary. They were white all over, except for their eyes, which were red."

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Oh snap! The ghost totally saw him peeking through the keyhole.

Again, I'll keep checking on this, it just gets better and better!

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Albinos!

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Adrianna

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

LMAOOOO

SilverStar

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

D: They aren't albinos?

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32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Albinos!

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Deetz

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Cool. More funny than scary though...

mangoman

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

I must be more scared than you, deetz, because while I was reading this, I started getting a chill. I can't wait for more to comes out.

Adrianna

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

I got chills myself after I proof read it.

mangoman

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

lol it's great that you proofread it, though. Most people I work with at my writing class at school almost never proofread giving them a not as great grade. -.-

Adrianna

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Bump

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Really, a two-hour bump?   A bit much.

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Deetz

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

lol this wasn't scary to me at all.

Well, i watch shows like "Celebrity Ghost Stories" all the time.

Bobyy

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Albinos!

They're not albinos, they're strips of bacon and they're alive and they're hear to eat us! DDD:

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ani

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Heard this story 5 times already -.-

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D-rock2308

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

Heard this story 5 times already -.-

this

krubby

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Re: Scary Story (Story from Beastmode)

>shines light through keyhole
>loud screech
>WIIIIIIIIIITCH!!!!!!!!!

Anyways, this wasn't scary for me, just kinda silly, though good. The only thing I'm afraid of is urban murals depicting ethnic diversity and a strong sense of community.

so scary.

Last edited by krubby (Mar 3 2012 12:03:38 am)