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Alexthementalone

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DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Hello,

This topic is all about describing the following picture:

Here is an example:

The desolate shack in the centre of the gloomy forest looks dilapadated and worn down, probably with some animal infestation in the hollow walls. The uneven windows look smudged and smeared with the possibility of breaking any minute. The surrounding forest area, with the worn down grass and the pointy trees sure to be a deadly warning to whatever deadly suprise this scene unholds...

I will pick the best describing paragraph and it will be +2rep to that person.

happy posting!

/Alexthementalone

Watashii

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Cool.

Tachyonic

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

I'm not going to do your English homework for you.

Alexthementalone

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Gadget Geek:

why would I need help with my 'english homework' as you said when have you seen my example paragraph?

tak4n

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Lol it's clearly a witch hut.

Description: The hero has to pass through a dead forest, he hears noises of animals he had not heard before. Deep in the forest, he finds a trail that leads somewhere. He follows it to find out that the trail leads to a small hut surrounded by a wooden fence. The hero is hungry and thirsty from the long road to save the princess from the dragon so he decides to go into the hut and ask for some help. As he opens the door, a black cat runs out of the house and into the forest. The hero asks if anyone is in the house, but no one answers. The house looks a lot larger from the inside than it did from the outside. The hero starts to look around the house. He thinks that he should not be in the house but he wants to find if there is any food or water. Suddenly he hears the door open and close. The hero realises that he is trapped. He tries to find a place to hide in but then...

Lol I can make a whole story over 1000 words long... I got good imagination. But you get the whole idea.
Also note how it goes from past tense to present tense, I would have gotten a low mark for that but I really think and like the way the story sounds the way it is. It would sound a lot worse if I wrote with the correct tense in my opinion. Really hate how we can't change tense in school

Last edited by tak4n (Dec 16 2012 1:47:02 pm)

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ILoveBacon

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

How would I describe it? A horrible piece of artwork.

Anch

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

I worn old house in the middle of a forest with trees that withered. It has grass surrounding it with stones making a pathway out of the house. It has a picket fence surrounding it and the whole house is crooked. It's chimney is tilted and has a string tied to it. The string is attached to one of the withered trees maybe to stabilize it.

Bimps

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

It looks CGI. Therefore, it sucks.

a3person

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

A wooden house in the middle of a forest during winter time where there aren't any leaves...

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I'm in love with a dragon <3

Alexthementalone

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Ok well the winner of this contest is...

tak4n

tak4n,you obviously took a long time to describe the picture and it was a good paragraph.     

tak4n, I will give you +2 rep

Also I will give +1 rep to the people who participated in this contest and didn't win,and they are:

.Anch159
.A3person (im being generous, you didn't really describe it, you wrote 1 sentence...)
.Patience is key (im being generous, you didn't really describe it, you wrote 1 sentence...)

Anyway thanks for participating,

/Alexthementalone

Echo!

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

the contest duration was only a day and a half?

a3person

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

A3person (im being generous, you didn't really describe it, you wrote 1 sentence...)

Thank you, your too generous! Although the contest should've been longer.

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I'm in love with a dragon <3

Deetz

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

I agree, I had a pretty good one: It's a house.

tak4n

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

:O Deetz should have won, that is the best description possible.

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Anch

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Thanks for the +rep! Can we be friends on ee? I see u (ur quite famous)

Last edited by anch159 (Dec 18 2012 6:43:48 pm)

EE_Scythe

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

While walking through a stupid forest containing stupid trees whom leaves have withered, I spot a stupid, ugly, house encased in some stupid, corroding, fencing. Around the house are uneven patches of stupid dead or decaying grass. The stupid house has a stupid chimney built upon it's stupid, poorly shingled,roof. The stupid architecture of the stupid chimney was most-likely done by a stupid architect; Seeing as the stupid chimney is oddly and stupidly twisted. There's some stupid pavement leading towards the stupid entrance of the stupid house. I have trouble seeing inside the stupid house as the stupid windows have not been washed in some time. Observing this stupid house, I have come to the conclusion the residents must be stupid as well.

Last edited by EE_Scythe (Dec 18 2012 7:09:06 pm)

Codfoshie

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

It is obviously batman.

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Didn't this topic get made a while ago?   With another house in the woods?

Last edited by 32OrtonEdge32dh (Dec 18 2012 8:40:28 pm)

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Different55

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Yes it did.

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Alexthementalone

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Re: DESCRIBE THE FOLLOWING PICTURE:

Yes I know this kind of topic got made a while ago...

However it was me who made that topic just with a alternate account. (however I forgot the pass for it)

lol

EDIT- CONTEST CLOSED

Last edited by Alexthementalone (Dec 21 2012 12:12:05 pm)