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dol257

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PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

hello fellow EEers, I am working on a 200x200 now. and it is goin pretty well, it is an adventure map. and the name will be survive nature.

STORY: they don't want you anymore, you get kicked out of this dark red place, and fall into the water, you see meteorites above you. far away is a green building, your las piece of hope. you try getting there but you cant pass. someone behind the door shouts: "you need 99 coins to enter! get them and survive, fail and die!" so you turn back, afraid but you aren't willing to die!

have fun! give me feedback like this plz

art:1-10
coingetting:1-10
creativity:1-10
difficulty:1-10

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWACwF4WuTa0I

Gamer1120

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Joined: 2015-12-29

Posts: 2,659

Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

Unfinishable.

Red

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

Pure crap.

dol257

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

ofcourse it isnt finishable, it is in level creation. and RED, dont shout things give feedback. help me develop my level, pure crap wont help that!

Silverheart

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

i got 3/8 coins, because i'm so bad at levels, the art is pretty good, i think except you may wanna play around with the building. all the level is is jumping, though so you might want to change that. also, you may want to add checkpoints so you aren't at the very top then miss 1 jump and have to restart overall, i think the idea is pretty good.
that's my feedback from a nooby level maker (currently)

dol257

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

thanks, the first person here that can give normal feedback!

Rokstarr

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

got 6/8 coins. It was kind of hard because you have to keep on jumping again and again when you fall. You might want to add some more challenges besides jumping from one block to another, something like adding more arrows, and etc. All in all I give you a 7/10 for the map. Keep Up the good work.:)

dol257

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

thanks, hope it finishes soon!

Muffin

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

art: 7 - pretty simple.
coingetting: 0 - annoying coins...
creativity: 6 - the art is kinda creative, the minigames eem like just jumping.
difficulty: Can't rate this one, it's jumping from block to block and completely restarting whenever you fall. Needs more saftey nets imo.

EDIT: 200th post. 1bigsmile1

Last edited by Muffin (May 23 2011 4:08:35 pm)

Wesso

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

The coin gathering is annoying and its bad that if you fall once you lose the whole level pretty much and need to restart the whole level from where you were

Damdow

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

You need more checkpoint man ...

Minis easy, but very very stressing

Jojomanjo

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

Wave is too high.

dol257

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

the wave is just art, and because of the massive amount of asking checkpoints, i will give thee checkpoints. to be added this week!

ARN64

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

art:8 I like it!
coingetting:6 a little annoying
creativity:7 pretty creative!
difficulty:8 it's hard that jumping from block to block and faaaallll, i'll wait for u to build checkpoints

nielsb

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

nice level

dol257

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

thanks

Alien67

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

awesome level!

dol257

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

ty very much!

+ repped you to help you get out of -

dol257

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

what dont you get?

just play my level!

Different55

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Joined: 2015-02-07

Posts: 16,575

Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

Don't double post.

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dol257

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

I did not, he removed his post!@! come on! I swear

Chewy

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Re: PLZ GIVE FEEDBACK TO THIS LEVEL

I believe you. Warning revoked.