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Benjaminsen2

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need helpers

I just got a new world it is a graet world and i'm needing some help click to help

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWl0HbLi-5a0I

tell me about if thare is somethang rong about my post...

thankyou.

AcellOfllSpades

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Re: need helpers

The words great, I'm, there, something, wrong, and thank you. You should also have a period after both "help"s and "Click, "Tell", and "Thank" should be capitalized.

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: need helpers

Corrected version:
I just got a new world.   It is a great world and I'm going to be needing some help.
Click to help: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWl0HbLi-5a0I
Also, please tell me if there is something wrong with my spelling or grammar.
Thank you.

Also, I might help if I find some time.

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lukas

Guest

Re: need helpers

hi LOL

Last edited by lukas (Sep 16 2011 8:08:10 am)