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ILoveBacon

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Mc Donalds

Me and Isaac are making and a world. The theme, as you can see in the title, is Mc Donalds. It dosn't have have mini's yet, just art, but we will add mini's eventually.
Pic:

Link for BETA:
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWfO0bg18VbEI

Link for Public:
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWfO0bg18VbEI
We have been making it for about 5/6 hours (Thats a random guess btw). So what do you think? How could we improve (Other than adding mini's and finishing the level or art)?

Thanks

Last edited by ILoveBacon (Nov 26 2011 5:20:19 am)

LD3H

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Re: Mc Donalds

i would say, you can say "I'm lovin EEt"

theredtigers

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Re: Mc Donalds

hmm no that will just look weird =p

ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

i would say, you can say "I'm lovin EEt"

Wait, what? I dont get that...

Last edited by ILoveBacon (Nov 19 2011 1:27:45 am)

Red

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Re: Mc Donalds

McDonalds' slogan: I'm lovin' it.
EE=everybodyedits. Which you most likely already knew.

ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

McDonalds' slogan: I'm lovin' it.
EE=everybodyedits. Which you most likely already knew.

Yeah I know that but where does the t come from?

Last edited by ILoveBacon (Nov 19 2011 1:27:13 am)

luker2009

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Re: Mc Donalds

Off-topic :lol
Lovin it+ee-i=eet sounds more like it than ee
On-topic Looks nice!

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: Mc Donalds

Is isaac, isaachall?

ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

Is isaac, isaachall?

Yes, (on forums TheRedTigers) he's amember of your crew isn't he?

Last edited by ILoveBacon (Nov 15 2011 12:02:18 pm)

MrScaniaV8Super

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Re: Mc Donalds

I can only say one thing about this: "I'm lovin' it"

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: Mc Donalds

Is isaac, isaachall?

Yes, (on forums TheRedTigers) he's amember of your crew isn't he?

Yeah lol

Just wondering, anyway looking good

ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

Is isaac, isaachall?

Yes, (on forums TheRedTigers) he's amember of your crew isn't he?

Yeah lol

Just wondering, anyway looking good

If you want me to ill put your crew logo in. I dont mind.

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: Mc Donalds

Yes, (on forums TheRedTigers) he's amember of your crew isn't he?

Yeah lol

Just wondering, anyway looking good

If you want me to ill put your crew logo in. I dont mind.

No, dont worry. Its not an eeas world.

xputnameherex

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Re: Mc Donalds

Finish the art first, then I shall give suggestions.

theredtigers

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Re: Mc Donalds

shall we work this weekend oke?

ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

sure. remember, if you see me on the forum and want to work on it pm me!

Muffin

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Re: Mc Donalds

That I is bugging me.

In I'm, you capitalize the I. You wrote it as i'm. Fix plox

Last edited by Muffin (Nov 18 2011 6:02:04 pm)

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: Mc Donalds

Interesting, because I had a very similar idea that I started on a long time ago but never finished.   I think I'll finish it now, but it might not look similar.   I'm going for a photorealistic look.

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ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

guys, the pic needs updating, but i cant be bothered to, so go into the world itself.

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: Mc Donalds

Here's my tips:
- There's no such thing as a McMilkshake
- Even if there was, you just scrawled it on there.   At least use a font
- The bag's shading could use some cross-hatching
- The letters on the ketchup are barely legible
- The word shouldn't have to take up multiple lines

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ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

Here's my tips:
- There's no such thing as a McMilkshake                                                                 
- Even if there was, you just scrawled it on there.   At least use a font     
- The bag's shading could use some cross-hatching        
- The letters on the ketchup are barely legible
- The word shouldn't have to take up multiple lines

1/2 - I thought there wasn't, but i never asked Isaac, who made it.
3 - ill do that in the morning
4/5 - we will fix that evetually

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: Mc Donalds

You never answered, maybe you didn't see it, do you mind if I publicize my almost-finished McDonald's level too?   I think you would like it.

Last edited by 32OrtonEdge32dh (Nov 23 2011 7:53:56 pm)

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ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

sure, I don't mind. I did miss your post, sorry.

Hammy120

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Re: Mc Donalds

Will you make minis?

ILoveBacon

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Re: Mc Donalds

Will you make minis?

Yes, eventually