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jfurey14

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JF Exploration - In Progress

Hey, I'm working on a new world called JF Exploration. I was wondering if anybody could just quickly give me a sentence review about my level and what I can improve. You can keep checking on the level for more and more updates to the level... so, yeah.

Here's the level:
Non-Beta
Beta

All regards,
Jfurey14

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Re: JF Exploration - In Progress

[1st reaction] Why are the trees at an angle?
[2nd reaction] Wow the map looks cool!
[3rd reaction] Why can't I get past the first coin, a block is in the way.
[4th reaction] This will look epic when complete.
[5th reaction] Under the hill there shouldn't be grass.
[6th reaction] Why can't I get past this first coin to escape this box.
[7th reaction] I'll tell jf on the forum.
[8th reaction] *typing*

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