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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

I drew a wave so there is something to look at in minimap.
Help from xjeex who made it look better by removing 4 BG blocks.

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Here it is: http://i.imgur.com/o2tHm.png

So the dots near the top still aren't actually symmetrical and you still haven't actually said whether that's intended. I think the ones on the right should be shifted along by a pixel.

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DQIXPlayer

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

I tried, and i think i did alright, for my mini standards. Hope you like!

Now with added epic face!

I like it a lot except for the fact that the dots top-right are quite annoying to navigate. If you could change that part and leave it as it is, I think it would make a good mini

Thankz, i changed it, its now like a kind of wall-bounce/jump. 1smile1

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Thankz, i changed it, its now like a kind of wall-bounce/jump. 1smile1

Looks good. It's not annoying any more but it does seem to be very hard. If you could somehow simplify it (either by moving the right-hand up arrow up one or adding more arrows), it'll be great

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doomy64

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Here's mine(I didn't have enough coin doors,so I replaced the missing ones with gold beta blocks).Click the image to play:

DQIXPlayer

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doomy64, i beat it in 6 seconds. nice tho. mega lamb i'll fix again.
EDIT: Re-fixed. Now with round jump.

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Djrulz

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Here's my level click on it to play

St Cool

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hey megalamb this is a first one and i think you will want it changed a little since i bended the rulers a tinybit
but what-the-hey
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWShRibMTea0I
i used art and music, the space is quite smallish and the mini isnt really that hard, so i can change it any time.
P.S. ive moved the coin like a few squares away but its impossible to turn back once the coin is got so its like its at the end.

DQIXPlayer

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nice levels you two, but saintcool, the coin is supposed to be in the border around the coin doors. other than that, nice job! 1bigsmile1

St Cool

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thats why i said i bent the rules a little
im sure megalamb wont mind

DQIXPlayer

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thats why i said i bent the rules a little
im sure megalamb wont mind

sorry, didnt notice that

222hockey222

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Here is my level: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWACTQvQV8a0I

The yellow mineral bricks/spawn is start, I hope you accept it.:)

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Here's mine(I didn't have enough coin doors,so I replaced the missing ones with gold beta blocks).Click the image to play: <a href="http://i1114.photobucket.com/albums/k534/doomy96/MysteryProject.png" rel="nofollow">http://i1114.photobucket.com/albums/k53 … roject.png</a>

Absolutely love this - The one downside is that it's only 20 pixels high instead of 21 but that should be easily rectified. If it makes it worse to raise it up by a block, I can live with it as it is

Re-fixed. Now with round jump.

Much better

Here's my level

Sorry, but this is just very common box minis. Nothing particularly fun and mostly annoying. Scrap it and try something else, although feel free to keep the beach theme!

hey megalamb this is a first one and i think you will want it changed a little since i bended the rulers a tinybit
but what-the-hey
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWShRibMTea0I
i used art and music, the space is quite smallish and the mini isnt really that hard, so i can change it any time.
P.S. ive moved the coin like a few squares away but its impossible to turn back once the coin is got so its like its at the end.

Whilst it looks fantastic and the music might be fun, the mini itself is far too annoying and compact to play. It really needs to be opened up and I really think that unless it were a Mario-themed look, there's no point (in this particular case) for having the Mario Death theme as part of the level. Sorry.

Here is my level: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWACTQvQV8a0I

The yellow mineral bricks/spawn is start, I hope you accept it.:)

Brilliant and this is a great example to others of something that's fun, innovative, and uses the background nicely - Whilst I loved it though I'm slightly worried that it might be just a tad too hard, but we can work out how to fix that if I take it (which seems fairly likely).

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coolmanman

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Hereis a second one but I think it's a bit on the easy side
and here is a third (these are fun to make)

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I felt like i needed a redemption. Sorry about the hook jump rule, but i forgot it. This time, there are NO hook jumps and still challenging, but you need teleporters. I hope you can encorporate it into the project, but even if you can't, i'm still proud to make it.
Here it is: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWT-DC-YhXbEI
Good Luck!

Djrulz

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Here's my level remade,click to play:

doomy64

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Absolutely love this - The one downside is that it's only 20 pixels high instead of 21 but that should be easily rectified. If it makes it worse to raise it up by a block, I can live with it as it is

Whoops!I fixed it

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Hereis a second one but I think it's a bit on the easy side

Believe it or not, this is actually a fairly common minigame. Too repetitive anyway.

here is a third (these are fun to make)

I found this easier that than the "second" one. Far too easy, sorry. Stick with your "first" (that you didn't scrap).

I felt like i needed a redemption. Sorry about the hook jump rule, but i forgot it. This time, there are NO hook jumps and still challenging, but you need teleporters. I hope you can encorporate it into the project, but even if you can't, i'm still proud to make it.
Here it is: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWT-DC-YhXbEI
Good Luck!

Love it - Far better than the previous attempt - Don't change a thing.

Here's my level remade

Hmm. A bit too easy. It needs spicing up a bit somehow but it looks cool.

I fixed it

Good except I far preferred having right arrows bottom left than dots. Is it no longer possible with right arrows there?

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doomy64

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Good except I far preferred having right arrows bottom left than dots. Is it no longer possible with right arrows there?

I replaced them with the dots because it was kinda easy using the arrows as a boost,but I hadn't tried it with 2 arrows there.It works fine with right arrows.(I replaced the dots)

Djrulz

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Here's my level remade again(and hopefully the last time),click to play:

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Good except I far preferred having right arrows bottom left than dots. Is it no longer possible with right arrows there?

I replaced them with the dots because it was kinda easy using the arrows as a boost,but I hadn't tried it with 2 arrows there.It works fine with right arrows.(I replaced the dots)

It's still enough of a challenge

Here's my level remade again

Annoying jump just before the top now. Sorry, but I think it might be worth scrapping the mini and trying something else. I like the background though.

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Djrulz

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Oops meant to post it again,but accidentally edited it.

the one   above is the new one now.

St Cool

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hey megalamb so just asking can i keep the art and just delete the mini and change the song or shall i scrap and restart?

Zakleo

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http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWSNABCLDHa0I

sry megalamb im an idiot

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Re: Mystery Project - Minigames Needed!

Oops meant to post it again,but accidentally edited it.

the one   above is the new one now.

Still far too easy, sorry. Not annoying now though.

can i keep the art and just delete the mini and change the song or shall i scrap and restart?

I would recommend scrapping it completely. If you're really attached to the art, try to use backgrounds to create it instead to give you far more space. As I said in the first post, there's no reason to use music for this unless it's somehow vital to the mini which is doubtful in such a small space.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWSNABCLDHa0I

Whilst it looks like a decent concept, I still didn't bother playing through it fully because the box at the bottom is supposed to be one pixel taller than it is.

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