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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

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Ilikenoah

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

i wanna know what people think about #200 this is not a team

Cool art!I really liked the hill and the rock the best.The mini games were ehhh,could be improved.But the name didnt fit at ALL.There were no zombies at least maybe they were the green things,and the whole level really didnt have anything to do with Halloween.The grass didnt even look like grass,it could be improved alot,the castle didnt look like a castle or whatever it was,And the "Enter if you dare" the smiley was not needed and neither was the words.Overall,good-ish level.

Ilikenoah

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#47 32Crew.

WOAH!Bat,creepy eyes,great concept!I love the Halloween theme!I love the shading you did on the top.Couple flaws though,the top is way more detailed than the bottom.I kinda got bored with the minis,so I kinda left lol.Maybe needs to be more challenging?Compliment on the shading!Alot of people dont do that,and im glad your team did.Nice level!

Ilikenoah

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I really like the theme it is spot on!I also love the way you did the writing.But,its has some major flaws.The art is not very detailed,and i cant get past the first mini because its all on timing.I really cant tell what the level is about,because there is so many different things.The characters are not very detailed as ive said before,and the gravestones and crosses look weird.The writing for "epic fad face" you can take right out.Also the   writing on the gravestone is in cursive that i cant read.Overall,good level that can be improved on.

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#47 32Crew.

WOAH!Bat,creepy eyes,great concept!I love the Halloween theme!I love the shading you did on the top.Couple flaws though,the top is way more detailed than the bottom.I kinda got bored with the minis,so I kinda left lol.Maybe needs to be more challenging?Compliment on the shading!Alot of people dont do that,and im glad your team did.Nice level!

Thank you for the great feedback!

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Baticon

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

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I really like the theme it is spot on!I also love the way you did the writing.But,its has some major flaws.The art is not very detailed,and i cant get past the first mini because its all on timing.I really cant tell what the level is about,because there is so many different things.The characters are not very detailed as ive said before,and the gravestones and crosses look weird.The writing for "epic fad face" you can take right out.Also the   writing on the gravestone is in cursive that i cant read.Overall,good level that can be improved on.

Thank you!

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

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Ilikenoah

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

#47 32Crew.

WOAH!Bat,creepy eyes,great concept!I love the Halloween theme!I love the shading you did on the top.Couple flaws though,the top is way more detailed than the bottom.I kinda got bored with the minis,so I kinda left lol.Maybe needs to be more challenging?Compliment on the shading!Alot of people dont do that,and im glad your team did.Nice level!

Thank you for the great feedback!

No problem

Ilikenoah

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

Backup team,The Guy Going Alone

I really like the theme it is spot on!I also love the way you did the writing.But,its has some major flaws.The art is not very detailed,and i cant get past the first mini because its all on timing.I really cant tell what the level is about,because there is so many different things.The characters are not very detailed as ive said before,and the gravestones and crosses look weird.The writing for "epic fad face" you can take right out.Also the   writing on the gravestone is in cursive that i cant read.Overall,good level that can be improved on.

Thank you!

No prob

Ilikenoah

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

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HOLY GIANT PUMPKIN!Thank you for shading!I love the art so much!Shading,3d,2d,complexity,sweet!Also the concept and Halloween theme shines through!I have a couple flaws though.The lines on the pumpkin dont match the shading alot.Because on the left side when its so light,the dark clashes with the light.Also on the minimap,the black looks terrible.Your moon looked weird with the crescent on the left side.The grass maybe be shaded more possibly?Also in the beginning I didnt know where to go and what to do.Maybe make a clear path or something?Idk.And the color on the pumpkin is so bright it clashes with the darkness and eerieness of the sky and ground.But other than those things,nice world!

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Bobyy

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The minis at the beginning could be improved I know that the lines on the pumpkin were hard because it was hard to find a color that isn't to bright or to dark but remember artist only have a limited amount of colors in EE. The shading in the grass I liked but again only limited amount of colors. thnks for the feedback.

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Ilikenoah

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

The minis at the beginning could be improved I know that the lines on the pumpkin were hard because it was hard to find a color that isn't to bright or to dark but remember artist only have a limited amount of colors in EE. The shading in the grass I liked but again only limited amount of colors. thnks for the feedback.

Yea I know about the color problem..Chris need to come up with more oranges also.No prob

Bobyy

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The colors can wait he first needs to fix Everybody Edits first. Man I hope he fixes it soon. >_<

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

#102   GK Crew
Btw, my level got reaaalllyyy messed up after the update that removed the decoration colors. Also, the clouds got messed up after the whipped cream decor got changed. (the haunted house used to be grey, and the clouds used to have multiple layers...

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

#87 PIX Crew

Thanks to chris for ruining it, backgrounds and decor ruined art

Minis are super easy as i THOUGHT chrises noob friends would judge

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#74 Joyful ducks. I know we won, but I'd still like some positive/negative feedback. Also, spaces come after all punctuation besides apostrophes and parentheses.

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#115 XP crew

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#12. Me, Myself, And I(Me)
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(House is empty now because Chris had tooken away colors for decorations)

Ilikenoah

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

#102   GK Crew
Btw, my level got reaaalllyyy messed up after the update that removed the decoration colors. Also, the clouds got messed up after the whipped cream decor got changed. (the haunted house used to be grey, and the clouds used to have multiple layers...

Oooh lightning * *     *eyes glued*XD.But nice concept! I really love that you really put the Halloween theme in,because I know some people who haven't..*Not saying names*. There are a couple things I would improve on though.Well,the art problem I can see,but I will not get into that.The lightning looks kinda like a pixel lightning.Also,there is so much room you can use!Use it!Lol.But anyways,I love the way you did the words.Pretty.Also stuff needs to be shaded a little bit.But cool level!

Ilikenoah

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#87 PIX Crew

Thanks to chris for ruining it, backgrounds and decor ruined art

Minis are super easy as i THOUGHT chrises noob friends would judge

WOAH!*Like Mario says it*I love the "Avengance" words.I also LOVE the tree.Its detailed and pretty.But,its really challenging for noobs.Trust me,I talked to one.Also the concept wasnt very clear.The words at the bottom were unnecessary also.But I liked the whole level overall.

Ilikenoah

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#74 Joyful ducks. I know we won, but I'd still like some positive/negative feedback. Also, spaces come after all punctuation besides apostrophes and parentheses.

Finally,some really Halloween themed winner! I like the above ground art. Concept=spot on!:). The only thing I would say would be that the moon maybe needs to be maybe a little bit bigger. Also,the minigames are good for all people,noobs and pros. The clown on the bottom doesnt really look like a clown to me though. The purple sparkle in the air looks kinda lonely though,lol. Person falling into the spikes,the spikes dont look really bloody because theyre only one shade of red.But thats about it.Great level overall.

Ilikenoah

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#115 XP crew

The hall creeps me out..JK!Pretty art and shading .The mini at the beginning;so hard.But really challenging minis=pro in the making!I love the Halloween concept and theme..great!The complexity is great too.I have a couple of flaws.The pictures look really tiny compared to the hall.And the minis are challenging for noobs who dont wanna try.Maybe a little shading behind the pictures or maybe some green eyes coming out to add to the eerie factor.But thats about it for badness.Overall,fabulous level!

Lopoi2

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

#115 XP crew

The hall creeps me out..JK!Pretty art and shading .The mini at the beginning;so hard.But really challenging minis=pro in the making!I love the Halloween concept and theme..great!The complexity is great too.I have a couple of flaws.The pictures look really tiny compared to the hall.And the minis are challenging for noobs who dont wanna try.Maybe a little shading behind the pictures or maybe some green eyes coming out to add to the eerie factor.But thats about it for badness.Overall,fabulous level!

Thanks.

Ilikenoah

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http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWQb94xtf3a0I
(House is empty now because Chris had tooken away colors for decorations)

*Taken XD.I really like that the minis are not too challenging but not too easy .Yes the art wasnt very good,but I really liked that you shaded the lamp post and I love the fence.Thinking outside of the box award goes...you!But art;not great.More detail,but because of Chris screwing up so much,cant exactly fix anything.Also,concept needs to be more clear.I love the 3d work you did too.Nice job!

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Re: Good Feedback For Your Halloween Levels!

Thanks for the feedback

And yep, very hard to see the concept as chris ruined it

Search "Pix Crew official topic" Find avengance on the list,   Could you re-rate the art with that pic? its before chris ruined it

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