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Zacoist

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

92. Oh and why the word "win"? makes me sad to see words where they are not needed.

What "win" sign? :3

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

47. I like how you tried to make the house 3D, but for some reason, the bat with the wings cut off jsut made it look strange instead. Is that bat a sprite? DQ...? And your moon is not a circle. Theres a circle guide online, use it in the future. Nice eyes though. And the smoke was layered nicely too.

The bat isn't a sprite (I didn't make it), it was original (aside from the fact that a person's logo was incorporated).   I know the moon isn't a circle, I was trying to make it more accurate, because no planet or moon is round.   It's either an oblong, or (like the Earth) bulges at the equator.   Thanks for the eyes and smoke props, I made that and I thought it was good too.   Any critique on our logo (which I made) or the roof (which I made) or anything?

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Baticon

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Hey Bee did you check my level?
Please.(At Page 2)

MaybeNot

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Hey Bee, just saw your thread (and it's a very good contribution to EE forums; well done) from my short break to see updates & insights on halloween contest submissions.

If you don't mind, can you review the 4th backup team 'Doubtful' which you may or may have not guessed that it's my team.

One more thing:

How I reviewed:
First I looked for originality
Second I look for artistic features (shading, being 3D, shadows etc)

For my level, can you review it on a different basis? The whole new idea how it's colourless, no 3d or shading at all makes it a whole new kind of art, and, IMO, it shouldn't be marked down because of non-existant factors in my world that actually makes it stand out from the rest.

Thanks for one of the most useful contributions to EE Forums yet.

-MN.

BluexxxDude

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Bee, your comments makes it feel, none can have the perfect level

32OrtonEdge32dh

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Well, there IS no perfect level, and there never will be.

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3mike231

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

The team had more then 1 player on it... So ipwner did those 2 pieces of art, while I did the rest. Wizard Mountain team 4

hytres1

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

sure, your opinions help a lot of players

Polis

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

3. Nicely done EE style house with a twist! It is actually 3D while remaining see-through, good job. Loving the windows, would love to see them up close. I would change the ground around the house, it either needs to be grassy or not, but right now the angle   of the house doesnt match the grass

Why we don't win if you think it is good art??

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

3. Nicely done EE style house with a twist! It is actually 3D while remaining see-through, good job. Loving the windows, would love to see them up close. I would change the ground around the house, it either needs to be grassy or not, but right now the angle   of the house doesnt match the grass

Why we don't win if you think it is good art??

Results havent been annouced yet...

smileyxp

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

oohh
do me,do me     

#110
"Halloween Take Over"
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAHRs5yOha0I

everyone's a critique lol

Baticon

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

BEE please look at my level.I tell you 3rd time,please!
Look at page 2,I gave the link

RhazzleFrazzle

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

about my level, there was origanilly a king zombie in the catacombs, but dc got rid of it for minigame space. i personally think the text makes it scarier. the background change screwed me up. for enter if you dare, if you dare was supposed to be invisible unless you were around it. same for here lies you. and i know. we did terrible on the grass.

Valarik

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Brawler700,  

I vaguely remember being in that room, which isn't a level. (from your sig pic)   What date was that?  

On topic:   What happened to Bee getting back to the people about their backup entries?

BEE

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Sorry for not getting back to you guys, I've been busy this past week and havent had the chance to review any more.  I should be able to finish tomorrow night or the next day.

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sefanja1

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Bee I think I see what happened...

You all judged the list off levels exept the back up list.

So the reason why only one level of the back up list has won is? Just becouse it is just picked out >.> Really?

BEE

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Sefanja, I am not an official judge, so this feedback has nothing to do with the actual results.

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RealJont

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BEE:I Helpt you with this ''Bee in Flower'' World User:Realjont(old user:Jont)

Aoitenshi

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BEE:I Helpt you with this ''Bee in Flower'' World User:Realjont(old user:Jont)

Incredible Necropost! I was almost Dazzled!

bgic

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k
if i bored ill read all

Tako

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BEE:I Helpt you with this ''Bee in Flower'' World User:Realjont(old user:Jont)

Warning issued for grave-digging.

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.