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Baticon

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

How can I find my team number?I am a backup team.

Dazz

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

How can I find my team number?I am a backup team.

baticon, back up teams have no numbers and she said: "I am only doing backup team reviews on request".

you can post the link and ask her to look at your level

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0176

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Thank you, BEE.
Off-topic: If I did solo, my level certainly would be in the "typical EEstyle art" category, because of my rather 2D and sometimes very cartoony art... This gave me a heads-up, I'll try to "improve" it.

Lopoi2

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

115. As I said before, it reminds me of beauty and the beast! Haha. It looks great, perspective is great and I love the window reflection on the floor. A few things. I mentioned before about that torch chilling there. I didnt know it was supposed to be on the floor, so a shadow would have helped. Also, the stairs look wonderful, but take into account the perspective. Even if you are looking straight on, your stairs will seem to get smaller as they get closer to your vanishing point. Looks great though. Those bricks mustve taken forever.

nice review... and the torch was really useless... I tried to make it better, but, i'm not so good at art.

Adn yeah, the blocks took a long time to make, one day i think.. but its over...

Thanks.

Red

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Solo btw.

Baticon

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4638/replx.png

Solo btw.

WOW.DUDE.
Btw,I am going solo too and here is my level,I hope you would look at it.
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWw66mW7-Sa0I

treejoe4

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

The pumpkin man is a kid treak or treating, i should of made the head bigger, and the ground . Thank you Bee.
The art was the work of me, nazty and mrboog.

Last edited by treejoe4 (Nov 9 2011 10:27:28 am)

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

The pumpkin man is a kid treak or treating, i should of made the head bigger, and the ground . Thank you Bee.
The art was the work of me, nazty and mrboog.

Yeah i was gonna say that, anyway thanks for doing the critiques i guess

ktostam450

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

54. I like your concepts but you need help with execution. I get a "mario" theme feel from this, and EE can be so much more than that. I love that you tried to make your house 3D, but don't forget to take into account a light source while shading. Also, your pumkpin needs shading or needs to be more pumpkin shaped or something... its just kinda hanging there.

I know, this pumpkin it's tragedy, but i haven't had much time to do it better.

Valarik

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Could you rate my art please.   I'm backup Haunted Pumpkin.

I made it so the mouth, nose and eyes light up

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWBVUXjKgCbEI

Epicfish

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

'You took the normal ee art style of layering, but put a nice spin on it. the bg blocks helped too I see. I like your pumpkins, but if they werent orange I would have thought that they were apples. I like how everything above ground is see through on the minimap above gorund though. I like the shading, but would prefer if you had either more objects or the ones you had were larger.'

I agree totally. I looked at it when it was done and thought: 'Oops; where's the art; lol.'
But yeah; thanks for your time .

Garfield2436

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

125. MOON o_o MOOOOON O_O MOO_OON. so distracting. So big. So beautiful! such nice shading around it too! I love the moon, and love the light house, but I feel like you could have done a different pattern in the dirt to make it flow better with the castle. Very nice castle btw, I would have added another wall on the far left to make it look more 3D though.

Thanks for the feedback, I didn't really do the art but I did most of the minis
Thank the rest of the crew for the art

theredtigers

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

bee why not do the back up my one is in there
i'm also back up plz do mine : http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWw0hu5MD-a0I thx

Last edited by theredtigers (Nov 10 2011 12:22:58 pm)

MRBOOGAWESOME

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

bee why not do the back up my one is in there
i'm also back up plz do mini : http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWw0hu5MD-a0I thx

Why dont you

I can imagine it took enough effort just to do the regular teams...

Zoey2070

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

BEE, you are a wonderful person for doing this. Honestly. And the fact that you did this for six hours is astonishing. Very nice of you. ;-;

also, #74. We would have never thought of the tree thing. Even though it's a really sexy tree.

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BEE

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

MIHB, considering how my skill level is so lacking that I am typically unable to even get past the beginning of most levels, my judging will be on minimap art. That's why there is more than one judge.

But you don't really know whether the minimap is good or not.

I think that you may upset people by creating a thread like this and my advice to those would be; to take this credit with a big pinch of salt.

Well, I have typically gotten positive feedback, but if people wish me to discontinue, I will certainly do so. Perhaps next contest I will do it by request.

Let me get settled in before I review the back ups that request it , had a tough day today

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

I think you should continue No one complained last time, and I don't think they will this year either. :3

Shy Guy

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Ahh, I'm so glad that you enjoyed our level. Really do. The art was really difficult to make. I was in charge of everything, because I was the leader of course.

I'm very glad to hear a good review from you

Lopoi2

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

I think you should continue.

Your review is just about art, not minis. Someone else could do a review by minis... I tried but i dont have time to play everything.

lickagoat

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

umm... i really dont know how to react to such a critique...

xputnameherex

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

umm... i really dont know how to react to such a critique...

With thanks.

Ilikenoah

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Umm,can you check my level out please?Im a backup,Team Ilikeart,with the level called "The Hanging Tree"I would like some good reviews please,thank you!

Zacoist

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

I like how Rpgmaster2000 gives us a slightly bit of time while BEE has already done critiques on levels which now can be fixed.

plat aka kingpooultra

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

16.   Ooh gruesome! Overall it looks good, but you could have expanded the house to make it more detailed. Locing the lightening, what pattern of blocks did you use? Your house could have been made more 3D as well.

Yay, I'm afraid its too late to fix this now, thanks for the feedback. Writing feedback on every level must have taken a long time. As for the lightning, I used blue glass blocks and put blue keys around it.

Fir3Fli3

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Re: BEE's Critiques of the Halloween Level Art.

Thanks a lot for making this whole list of reviews, amazing! (:

33. Loving the spiderweb in the corner and the trees, but the skull and the house are normal 3D objects flattened into 2D. I know the BG blocks made this difficult, but even ebfore they were added, you could have fleshed out the sides of the house. The roof does a good job making it 3D but otherwise it looks as thin as paper. Also, some of those branches could no be supported, I wonder what minis are in there, and if you could add more blocks to show realistic support. Cute eyes in the forest though

Thanks, about the 2D stuff, it's because we wanted the best in-game experience too, not just minimap!
Andd, there aren't mini's in the whole level, just in and around the skull and house. (;
Also, We probably have the only level with no black blocks at all(except the spiderweb ;p), and no effing decorations and confusing backgrounds in-game. ;p
Anyway, thanks a lot for the review. (: