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#1 Before February 2015

Breadfinn
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Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

- Magic Bottle -

Here's our first Navian map. I'd like to special thank all of the members who helped with it.

So, this is our first map, so it's not the best. I do agree on that but we hope you enjoy:

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Difficulty = Easy - Medium

Last edited by Breadfinn (Aug 7 2011 3:33:05 pm)


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#2 Before February 2015

Oturan
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Yay, It's finally published //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/big_smile

#3 Before February 2015

D-rock2308
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

clouds=floating whales.

#4 Before February 2015

xXExpress0Xx
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D-rock2308 wrote:

clouds=floating whales.

LMAO.

#5 Before February 2015

Breadfinn
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Heyhey! Stay on topic and play the level and give us feedback.


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#6 Before February 2015

Baticon
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

First win---Wtf was that?  
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#7 Before February 2015

Oturan
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Actually Jaa won before You

#8 Before February 2015

Baticon
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Oturan wrote:

Actually Jaa won before You

And ma other question?

#9 Before February 2015

TrappedTime
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Difficulty = Easy - Medium

*Plays*

Nice level.

#10 Before February 2015

Breadfinn
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

baticon wrote:

First win---Wtf was that?  
http://i.imgur.com/jmH5B.png

Oh yeah. Lol that's a fake account. I was revenging on him because he kicked me //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/tongue


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#11 Before February 2015

supadorf24
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

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I'd say the thing you need to work on most is difficulty curve. The mini leading to con #14 and the one after that are unusually hard compared to the rest of the level, which is overall easy. Other than that, fun map. //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

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#12 Before February 2015

ugotpwned
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

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good level, except the shading on clouds, theres times to use the criss cross shading and times not too. they dont look like clouds at all. BUT, overall good somewhat fun level. //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

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#13 Before February 2015

manurthebest
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

We will take the above comments into consideration. Thanks for the feedback! //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/smile

#14 Before February 2015

Phenomenon
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

I overall like the world, really. But the clouds... Ofcourse they're used for the minigames now, but even cartoon clouds aren't shaped like that. And about the bottle itself, the neck is to short. I've never seen any bottle with such a short neck considering that the bottom part of the bottle is so big. And maybe try using less black borders, they are so annoying...

But that won't include my rate to much =3
I give the world a 7/10

#15 Before February 2015

Oturan
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Then You haven't seen some of the bottles that we have in Sweden :3

#16 Before February 2015

Phenomenon
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Never seen them indeed =3

I've googled "Ship in a bottle in Sweden" <3 And they do look weirder then here. But it think the bottle in-game looks strange because it is so long with such a short neck.

#17 Before February 2015

Oturan
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Okey :3 everyone has their own opinions... cause I like it ^_^

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#18 Before February 2015

Phenomenon
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

I like it too, just saying.

#19 Before February 2015

D-rock2308
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Needs more floating whales.

#20 Before February 2015

Breadfinn
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Addi wrote:

So, this is our first map, so it's not the best. I do agree on that but we hope you enjoy

This^


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#21 Before February 2015

D-rock2308
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

Addi wrote:
Addi wrote:

So, this is our first map, so it's not the best. I do agree on that but we hope you enjoy

This^

And it could be better WITH

MefromzTheHood wrote:

Needs more floating whales.

#22 Before February 2015

WELL_
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

gg!
really good map, I enjoyed every single part of it(I won, but I am too lazy to post screenshot). However I wouldnt call it easy, it is medium(for most players). I like both, minis and art(except the fact, that sand is different on the left and right side - just minor detail + coulds), there were some very nice ideas.

What I dont like? Last big mini, with way too many stuff around(keys, decorations etc.) it was confusing.

looking forward to your next level ^_^

#23 Before February 2015

LegoKing
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

i like it but i dont really like that clouds :/ but i give 0-10 and 10=best      i give: 8½

#24 Before February 2015

manurthebest
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Re: Navian Crew - Magic Bottle

WELL_ wrote:

gg!
really good map, I enjoyed every single part of it(I won, but I am too lazy to post screenshot). However I wouldnt call it easy, it is medium(for most players). I like both, minis and art(except the fact, that sand is different on the left and right side - just minor detail + coulds), there were some very nice ideas.

What I dont like? Last big mini, with way too many stuff around(keys, decorations etc.) it was confusing.

looking forward to your next level ^_^

Thanks for the feedback! //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/big_smile

Last edited by manurthebest (Aug 9 2011 9:07:38 am)

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