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Oldschoolgamer

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From: Lost in real life

Joined: 2015-03-07

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Escape the starship!

O.K. so with the coming of the tall worlds comes my new map...

Escape the starship!

Gather the pieces of the key to the airlock (orange coins) and evacuate the starship to save yourself from a collision with meteors. Take note that the key pieces can be gathered in any order and that there is no need to strain your lifeforce reaching the more devilishly protected portions. Also, as an added challenge, collect the pieces of the survival kit (blue coins) so that you can advance society further and create a small settlement on the moon.

Difficulty level (on a scale of 1-5 with 1 being noobishly simple and 5 being unbelievably hard):
2-3

Length:
Moderate

Links:
Non-beta
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWxEdHxoBEbEI

Beta
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWxEdHxoBEbEI

ONE FINAL NOTE: Any constructive feedback that could help me improve is greatly appreciated.
EDIT: Ive gone back and edited the portal positions a bit so they shouldnt be as annoying when trying to do minis.

Last edited by OldSchoolGamer (Jan 5 2012 10:53:29 am)

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DKZero

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Re: Escape the starship!

The beta link leads to non-beta.

The art was really good, but one thing I don't like was in the first mini, I falled down and when I moved back for another try I got on the portal which leads to start. Which was verry annoying. :/

7/10

Last edited by DKZero (Jan 5 2012 3:09:23 am)

tokebot

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Re: Escape the starship!

hey osg, great map

good job on the overall composition, what a far cry from your old maps. excellent.

challenge wise i have some nitpicks:

challenge resets are sometimes annoying because of the portals, so you want to restart the challenge but you accidently enter a portal and spend 5 minutes switching between rooms because some enter on the right and some on the left side (maybe a mistake)

i also don't enjoy multistage jumps very much (do something, be safe, do something else, fall down, repeat the first thing again)

other than that good job

tjalf

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Re: Escape the starship!

Wow, fantastic map. Shading is very realistic.

Kankurou

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Joined: 2016-03-30

Posts: 172

Re: Escape the starship!

Awesome lvl. Great concept and art epic backgroung . I like that u used other room for every mini.
Some minis are annoying

and I think that u forgot to test lvl . you should check lvl(without godmode) to find annoying minis, exploitable minis and bugged portals.

well... +rep

Last edited by kankurou (Jan 5 2012 8:01:35 am)

sefanja1

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Re: Escape the starship!

Very nice. I really liked it.

And I won to

Xenonetix

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From: Moving on with my life

Joined: 2015-03-07

Posts: 899

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Re: Escape the starship!

You wanted constructive criticism: Your Beta link isn't a Beta link.

I'll probably post later with how the level is

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Kankurou

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Joined: 2016-03-30

Posts: 172

Re: Escape the starship!

wow u rly fixed everything. Nice job.

manurthebest

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Re: Escape the starship!

Me win

Pretty fun, great minis, great art.

Jan12345

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Re: Escape the starship!

Great art and really nice mini's
Win!!