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Kaosslasher

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Need feedback & a little help on level :)

So, im about 70% - 80% Done

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Please note: This is my FIRST artistic level (that isint pixel art ) So please, be nice, i did try my best to make an origanal level thanks~

Also: If Anyone wants to help with minis ( water of sky ) feel free to pm, or comment ~Thanks
AND!: We need a name for the level suggestions please

Helpers:

~PYROMANIAC/MXCREW Or Pyromaniac - Sunglasses~
~Nighter - Filled in water ~
~BEE - Ideas ~
~Darkday - Sunglasses shade~
~Amoebalord - Random stuff~
~NikK - stuff~
~Ravatroll - Awesome tutorial for clouds ;D ~

Last edited by kaosslasher (Feb 16 2011 11:26:01 am)

MIHB

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

Galactus, about to consume the sun.

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

good idea but... not quite the level style 'xD guess i should have mentioned that

BEE

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

well if its happy and adventury, you could make it so the suns rays expand a bit more, even making them a wavy style as well, like animated suns have. And add sunglasses to the sun =P

or a RAINBOW

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Fendox

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

I would make the sun a bit more orange. :3

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

well if its happy and adventury, you could make it so the suns rays expand a bit more, even making them a wavy style as well, like animated suns have. And add sunglasses to the sun =P

or a RAINBOW

Haha, im so adding the sunglasses 'xD

I would make the sun a bit more orange. :3

Yeah, im just getting the out line, then i'll worry about the detail

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

And add sunglasses to the sun =P

Wanna help with that 'xD i cant do it

Bump, and first post updated

NikK

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

I don't have any ideas for now but if you need anything (except beta block, secret passages, factory pack, christmas decoration and new years decoration) just tell me xD

No, seriously, if you need me to do anything, you know what to do

Blissinged

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

I think you could add a rocket ship flying towards the moon, andm make tons of hard invisible platforming inside it

MIHB

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

Well, if you want to go in the opposite direction of Galactus consuming the sun, you could do two lovers, standing on either cliff, reaching across, their fingers touching across the sun . . .

See cause the first thought is awesome, and the second is cheesy as hell.

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

Lol, that would be ... pretty cool, but i SUCK with people 'xD

I don't have any ideas for now but if you need anything (except beta block, secret passages, factory pack, christmas decoration and new years decoration) just tell me xD

No, seriously, if you need me to do anything, you know what to do

Yup, if i need anyhelp ill ask you first ;D

Last edited by kaosslasher (Jan 30 2011 7:58:53 pm)

ilyas3d

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

The map doesn't really make sense...

Why are there rocks protruding in front of the water?

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

There more of a ... cliff, and i'll change the water, so it looks like its a lower level than the rocks

BEE

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

I really dont like imposing my own style on other people, but I did a preliminary sketch with ms paint as to what changes I would personally make to the level:

Feel free to use any or none of the ideas, I wont be offended either way.

let me know the level link too so I can come see it in person, if you dont mind

Last edited by BEE (Jan 30 2011 11:04:40 pm)

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MIHB

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

That is one creepy voyeur sun peeking over that blue hedge.

BEE

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

Bahahhaa, youre right it does look a little creepy, it looked worse with a smile though XD

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Doghana

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

up high near the top of your map, since the sun is setting you should put a few stars.

i do mine like: (+ represents crowns, and O represents the white metal blocks, since i cant upload right now)

    +
+O+   - small star
    +

        +
     +O+
  +OOO+
     +O+   medium
        +

        +
     +O+
  +OOO+
+OOOOO+     Large
  +OOO+
     +O+
        +
They look pretty cool

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

up high near the top of your map, since the sun is setting you should put a few stars.

i do mine like: (+ represents crowns, and O represents the white metal blocks, since i cant upload right now)

    +
+O+   - small star
    +

They look pretty cool

Actually, i think its rising 'xD

but i can always change it ;D

SmilingNothing

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

Are these cliffs in sea? :S

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

No, i think im gonna make them bigger, like in bee's post, maybe a little smaller though...

[edit] AFTER mant try's i think this one looked best, gawd was i angry at it, twice i felt like quiting

Last edited by kaosslasher (Jan 31 2011 2:55:20 pm)

Doghana

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

up high near the top of your map, since the sun is setting you should put a few stars.

i do mine like: (+ represents crowns, and O represents the white metal blocks, since i cant upload right now)

    +
+O+   - small star
    +

They look pretty cool

Actually, i think its rising 'xD

but i can always change it ;D

lol, soz, i thought it was setting. maybe you could do some pale colours in the sky to show that?

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

up high near the top of your map, since the sun is setting you should put a few stars.

i do mine like: (+ represents crowns, and O represents the white metal blocks, since i cant upload right now)

    +
+O+   - small star
    +

They look pretty cool

Actually, i think its rising 'xD

but i can always change it ;D

lol, soz, i thought it was setting. maybe you could do some pale colours in the sky to show that?

Meh, i dunno

Ill figure everything out when im dont the water and cliffs

Xpo20

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

Maybe... Ehhh... Gotta be original here... The Adventure of Link 2? :O *is smacked*

Kaosslasher

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

o really? is that what its from?

cause i was just sleeping, and a got an awesome picture i my head :/

i knew it was from a game !

Nighter

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Re: Need feedback & a little help on level :)

Well I could help you with adding sun glasses Kaosslasher. And some of those other ideas up there..Why not adding a sky to it? Like the sky can be the brighter blue bricks. Instead of dark blue it would be light blue for the sky. Seems like a good idea doesn't it Kaosslasher? So what was the name of the level again so I can search it up and see if your on it.