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Silverheart

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Feedback and mini maker for "road to the mountains"

I have been working on this level for a while, and its my first art level. i would like constructive criticism and someone to help make better minis. it isn't finished, but i made it so you could get through. the level is mostly by me, with some help by violetrose. hope you enjoy it.

Beta:
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWAIDlCr2Oa0I
non-beta:
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAIDlCr2Oa0I

map picture:

better name ideas also appreciated.

EEguy

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Re: Feedback and mini maker for "road to the mountains"

Nice level
The mountains need a bit better shading, and that river doesn't seem right to me. The grass also needs shading, but I see you made some minis there.
Overall it's a good level (art) for your first Keep up the good work.

Tako

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From: Memphis, Tennessee, USA

Joined: 2015-08-10

Posts: 6,663

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Re: Feedback and mini maker for "road to the mountains"

Instead of using your imagination to make art, try to copy pictures. Not EXACTLY the picture, just look for designs and where colors are located.

You know how BEE makes her art? She starts with a picture from the internet and edits it to her liking.

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

dol257

Guest

Re: Feedback and mini maker for "road to the mountains"

try not to lose focus on the minis, so that they wont be regular/easy!

Silverheart

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Re: Feedback and mini maker for "road to the mountains"

Instead of using your imagination to make art, try to copy pictures. Not EXACTLY the picture, just look for designs and where colors are located.

You know how BEE makes her art? She starts with a picture from the internet and edits it to her liking.

I did find a picture, a lake with flowers in front and mountains in the background, but then it changed to this.

Chimi

Guest

Re: Feedback and mini maker for "road to the mountains"

Your grass is vanilla.

Silverheart

Guest

Re: Feedback and mini maker for "road to the mountains"

?? what do you mean by that?

Jasonma

Guest

Re: Feedback and mini maker for "road to the mountains"

lol nice! looks pretty nice. can't wait to see it when it's finished.