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Amit

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Joined: 2015-02-22

Posts: 238

I Crew 3rd level

Hey all!

I Crew 3rd level is finnished

We will be happy for you awsome feedback ^^

Link for all non beta, is here

Link for all beta, is here

Polis

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Joined: 2015-02-23

Posts: 440

Re: I Crew 3rd level

So, there's your third level.
The art is really nice, well, except the plane. The plane was okay.
The minis were fun, but I found some exploits.

Ratings:
Art: 9/10.
Minis: 8/10.
Fun: 8/10.
So that means: 8.3/10.

Good job.
Keep this up.

Last edited by Polis (Apr 8 2012 3:36:08 pm)

D-rock2308

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Fantastic work, except that playing in some parts of the BG's were annoying to see.

Gashley

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Art: 9/10   ( i agree with polis with the air-plane)
Mini-games: 9/10 (some of the earlier mini-games i found harder than some of the later ones)
fun: 10/10 (i loved it)

overall 9/10

hytres1

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Art are very good, but the minis are easy.

Total: 9/10

Jonesie

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Nice level! Great art and fun minis.
Art: 9/10
Minis: 7/10
Overall: 8/10

Last edited by Jonesie (Apr 9 2012 2:50:09 am)

flamex234

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

win:)

theditor

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Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 1,320

Re: I Crew 3rd level

Man,i love this map!
Such a nice art
I havent seen so lovely world with such a good minis in a long time!
Althrough,the plane needs more colors,it looks too dark.
Those clouds,trees and hills are just pure awesomeness
Keep it up,guys! You are doing good

My ratings:
Art: 5/5 - Plane needs some more colors,otherwise its perfect!
Minis: 4/5 - A few minis are a bit bad because of triple jumps,also one near the end was pretty bad.
Fun: 5/5 - I enjoyed it a lot!
Total: 14/15 - Extremely good,i just love it!

~Teddy

Last edited by theditor (Apr 9 2012 5:03:14 am)

Lictor666

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Nice Art

An I Win !

(bad quality)

MrScaniaV8Super

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

I liked it, good level guys!

Zakleo

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Art 10
Minis 9
fun 9

Aoitenshi

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Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 2,058

Re: I Crew 3rd level

Feedback as I promised~ (I'm a rather harsh rater )

Art: 7/10 - The art is good, but the sky lacks 3 Dimensional Representation. Use perspective, the further the sky is, the more & smaller the cloud fog there should be.

The Stream lacks flow, maybe you can add more splash flow.

Minis: 7.5/10 - Not so bad.

Ximen

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

here's some feedback

The art is really nice but the plane is a bit weird :/
Further the minis are enjoyable but a bit easy:D

8/10-It's a nice level:)

Pyromaniac

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,868

Re: I Crew 3rd level

Ok.. So I just finished. And as promised, here is mah feedback

Art: Probably an 7/10. Here's why-

I loved the clouds, at least, im pretty sure they are clouds.. The things around the big blue thing . Speaking of which, im not exactly sure what that is. At first I thought it was a stream.. But now idrk. Now I think its part of the sky..So you might want to find a way to make that more clear.. I dont really like the three bird things. I would spread them out more so they aren't all in one place. I love the rest of the sky. I also like the hills for the most part.. The only thing I would change are the hills to the far right.. More shading would be nice if possible. Also, the cow.. Its quite big dont you think? Overall, its a very, very, VERY, nice third level artwise.

Minis: I would give you an 8/10. Heres why-

Im not a mini person, but Most of the minis were very fun.. I didnt really like the one in the top fin of the plane though.. Idk why i just didnt like it. Also, a mini in one of the hills I got stuck on.. Wambo knows which one.. I thought you guys did a great job of incorporating everything..

Fun: 8/10: I really liked it!

Overall: 23/30..

Really nice level. good art, Great minis.. I cant wait to see more

killeratz

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Excellent Work ,pretty easy minis and i love everything except your stupid cow it sucks ^^ it looks like a man in a costume...

Last edited by killeratz (Apr 9 2012 7:02:38 am)

Pyromaniac

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,868

Re: I Crew 3rd level

And its REALLY big compared to everything else

Benje00

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From: BenjeLand

Joined: 2015-02-17

Posts: 587

Re: I Crew 3rd level

Another great level.   I found some minor exploits.  

First of all, you can fall back here: (image below).   Very annoying; you have to do 3 minis to get back up there.

Here, you can just hold up and jump on dot.   Very minor, but I thought you'd want to know.

This one is a bigger exploit.   You start here: (image 1)   and jump then jump over the green platforms here: (image 2) and jump again to pass mini.

Image 1:

Image 2:

Now for the review.   You thought that was my review right?

Minis: 7/10   Minis had a lot of double and triple jump and some had exploits and one fallback.

Art: 8/10 The airplane and the cow look awkward, but the clouds looked very good and fluffy.   I thought they needed to be more together though.

Fun: 9/10  

Overall: 8/10

Win:

Last edited by Benje00 (Apr 9 2012 9:50:41 am)

Miasmic

Formerly Boh

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 195

Re: I Crew 3rd level

Thanks everyone for all your feedback. I agree with the niggles about the art - we are still learning each others styles and ways of building so we haven't got things perfect. yet
I would like to defend catcow. Yes he's big, yes he's ugly, but he kept us company while we made the level and nobody had the heart to kill him so.... long live catcow

Muffin

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

8/10, the minis and art just don't mix very much...

RayOfLight

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Minis: 6/10 They were alright. Nothing too great. Some problems here and there.
Art: 9/10 Very detailed, but the airplane and the cow kind of ruin the effect.
Overall: 7.5/10 Not a bad map at all.

Thanel

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Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 713

Re: I Crew 3rd level

Nice world. Cow looks funny ^^

gerben12

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Nice level!
Very nice art but the plane...
i dont like the plane sorry :$

Criz

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

Great level, if u know how u can pass that in 10 minutes:D

the matrix

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

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Tako

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From: Memphis, Tennessee, USA

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Posts: 6,663

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Re: I Crew 3rd level

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