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Amit

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I Crew Nightmare

A level made by I Crew

We worked on it quite along time, We hope you like it

Summary

When I woke up, I was laying in a cave. Lost, blind, nothing to go.

Until I saw a centipede, I decided to follow it. I followed it though the castle. On the way I climbed out of a

canyon, saw scary tree?s, walked through a lot caves, on a lot ledges trying not to fall.

Bridges like they were floating, so high was it! All the way a big, purple eye in the strange thick clouds

followed me with his gaze.

When I reached the weird castle I almost fell in a Firepit and had to jump in a hole. It lead to a cave. In

that cave I encoutered the enormous grown centipede! I escaped it by entering the castle from the cellar.

In the Castle I climbed to the highest balcony and saw far away my house! I found out I could walk on the

clouds.   After a while I fell through the clouds, because of an appearing blackhole. Luckily I was close to

the ground. Only way to search for my house I had to crawl through caves. Where I encountered Spiders

and rats.

* If you want the full story written by our author Vyvo,   then see below

Are you ready for it???

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The Full Story

I have to go sleep... so tired. When I laid down,   I immediately fell asleep.

When I woke up I saw something weird beside my arm; ?there is something wrong here.? I felt something hard under my head. It was dark, I could barely see anything, and my head hurt.

When I was fully awake, I started to see suspicious things in the dark. I saw rocks, a wand of stone. ?Am I in a cave? And what is this?? A centipede. ?Just a normal centipede nothing to be scared of.? When it walked away I started thinking; ?there must be an exit, how would the centipede get here anyway?!?

?I'll follow the centipede?, I thought. Finally After a few minutes I saw light. Strange purple light though, when I stepped outside I expected to see the sun and blue sky ?   but what I saw shocked me.
I saw a big purple Eye in the clouds in the dark space, the air had no blue colour like earth has.
?Am I in outerspace or what?? Because I was so scared I almost ran back into the cave!
But I was starting to hear weird sounds coming from the caves and the mountain where I am standing, so I didn?t go back in; ?I?d better find a different way to get out of this area.?

Close by I see more cliffs and some trees, dead trees which are hanging over and it looks like they have eyes! I decided not to look at them and started to climb down. The scary sounds are fading away. ?Glad I don't hear them anymore.?

On the bottom of the canyon, I saw a path to the other side where the trees were standing. Behind the first tree I saw a bridge. But I can't reach it From here. I started searching for a path until I saw the centipede again! It scurried into a hole, surprisingly I was small enough to follow it . After a while the tunnel got   bigger, I found myself   in a bigger group of caves.
?No way back, so let's head in the caves forward!?
In the dark I started to see eyes and other weird things. ?Please let it be the bats, just bats.
Just walk along...?

I started to climb, when I reached the end, I saw light there. I climbed out of the caves and managed to get on the other side of the first tree and was able to cross the bridge. I had to climb through the hole of the second tree to reach the second bridge.

There, a castle, big and scary just like the castle from Frenkenstein the movie! When I knocked on the door nothing happened. I knocked again but fell in a hole which just appeared under me! The hole led to the bottom of the big bridge. And under the bridge I saw flames! Flames so hot, and so close. Lower on the cliff I saw a hole. ?How many holes are there in this country, world, planet, whatever...?
I managed to escape the flames by jumping on the ledge and entering the hole..
While entering the next cave I was thinking about the centipede, my lil pal which showed me the way when I was about to get lost or panic.

A strange sound echoed in the tunnel, it was different than the ones in the other caves.
Light at the end, I ran to the biggest cave. As I stood in the middle of the cave a giant centipede showed up behind me, it was the centipede from before! Did it want to lure me to a cave, all the time? Because it is blocking the exit now and started to chase me!
I kept running and climbing for my life. When it was almost near me I found a spot, narrow enough to stay away from him. It led to an door. A stone door. It was open and I entered the room behind it. ?Is this the castle?? Yes it should be. The torches were lit and the light was enough to see and walk around. ?There must be someone here?, otherwise there shouldn't be lit torches and candles! I went up the stairs and managed to open a door and stepped outside on the highest balcony.
I was searching for a way to escape from this nightmare. Then suddenly I saw something green.
Could it be?

?Yes! It is my home!? I saw my home! It was behind the big mountain, but there is another big canyon behind it. While I was standing there the Purple Eye, high in the sky and clouds was watching me again. It was too creepy. When I wanted to head down, the door shut and fell in the lock. I was stuck outside on a high balcony. ?What should I do??

I shouted for help, with no result. Before I started to panic, I saw that the clouds with the Eye in it were suddenly close and lower now! When I just woke up, Yesterday? I lost the time, being in the caves and dark so much! So hungry and thirsty, but now I know where to go! But when I just woke up the clouds were floating a lot higher! And I started to see a blackhole which just appeared a while ago, and planets were coming closer to the earth! ?What in god's sake is happening??

The clouds which just reached the height of the balcony were looking thick. So thick that I decided to touch it and check if I could climb on them, and I could! First one hand, then the other, placing my right foot. ?Yes? I didn't fall through it! I am standing on clouds! Where am I that I can stand on clouds? Another planet? Heaven? Hell? Is this what hell is? I hope not. Thinking about my fate while I was walking on the clouds I suddenly fell through a gap.

Luckily I landed on the big mountain! I didnt fall hard!
Since there was no option but   to enter the caves, I walked towards the opening,   I was started to hear these weird noises again! The second cave was full of small spiders. When I accidently stepped on one, I felt a weird breeze. I turned around and there was a big, very big spider! Probably poisonous so I did what everyone would do: run! I fell from the spider cave in another cave, where big rats showed up.

C'mon what is this? A nightmare, a dream? I was getting mad and pushed them away by throwing rocks. Behind their nest there were a lot small caves. Small caves are a good sign, ?nothing big can be in there!? The path through the caves went up. After a while I had to climb again. But what did I smell there?

What was it? Wood, smoke? I couldn't place it. Until I saw light, no weird strange purple light, but light of a lantern. My hope was growing bigger, I saw it more and more. It was my house! There on the Ledge, was standing my safety, my green zone! I ran to the house, the door was locked, the same for the windows. I decided to enter via the chimney. After my big adventure, climbing a house is nothing compared to all the cliffs, ledges and mountains. I took a seat in the chair. I looked to my bed; ?but... How??
There in my bed I am laying while I'm sitting here in the chair! ?How is this possible? Am I dead just like I mentioned before?? I faded out because of my shock.

Next morning I was woken by the roosters crow. I was laying in my bed, the sun was shining
the birds are whistling. ?It was...?
It was just a dream, no, a nightmare? ?It was just a nightmare!? I was so happy that the trip I had in my nightmare wasn't real! I ran outside, said ?hi? to the cow, it said ?boh?. I was laughing and crying with joy, I was so happy the terrible adventure I had wasn't real!
I laid down, watching the sky. I felt something moving across my arm... hundreds of tiny legs? ..Was it the centipede!?
Not the one out of my nightmare...              ?It was just a nightmare??

As Always, we will be happy for your feedback ^^

People who worked on the level - AmitAtsmon, Boh, Vyvo, Polis, Gashley, Silverstar29, Wambo, Whatter, Jan1234 and Zakleo

Last edited by amitatsmon (May 20 2012 1:20:54 pm)

~Omri~

Guest

Re: I Crew Nightmare

art 10/10 outstanding
minigames 6/10 were really easy but some where fun
concept: 9/10 the mansion looks like NC Haunted Mansion
small details: 10/10 alot of small art (rats trees etc)
need to improve: minigames
edit: ehm minigames are hard....

Last edited by ~Omri~ (May 20 2012 11:39:32 am)

NaztyRushz

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Amazing map, this pwns Nazty Crew( for the moment) lol but anyway I can wait for the you know what map to start!

KanibalFrost

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Judging just by art, i personally think this level is better than most of EX Crew's levels.
Usually there are some parts in every level that i don't like or just like less than the rest, but i really can't find a part of this level that doesn't look amazing. You just went Pro mode homies. 1bigsmile1

Zakleo

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Teddy and Jan12345 helped too... Infact, every I Ceew member helped apart from DDS and PSY.

Vyvo

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Congratz to Thanel, the first winner on this map! And thanks!

Sorry to say, but Theddy, you actually didnt help... Only complaining, or saying its crap, and if you changed something you couldn't do anything with it... (heard from several players)

Last edited by Vyvo (May 20 2012 12:25:01 pm)

Thanel

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Joined: 2015-02-18

Posts: 713

Re: I Crew Nightmare

Amazing I really enjoyed this world. Great work guys.

I dont have time to write feedback now, but I will do it when I come back.

Last edited by Thanel (May 20 2012 12:24:37 pm)

ILoveBacon

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Exploit.

Vyvo

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

That's no exploit

Amit

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Joined: 2015-02-22

Posts: 238

Re: I Crew Nightmare

what part of this is an exploit?

Zakleo

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

It isn't. TheGame is just a nub

ILoveBacon

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Zakleo

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

TheGame, that's not a pro spot. Infact, it's so nub I removed the blue coin that was there. Nubwub.

Polis

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Joined: 2015-02-23

Posts: 440

Re: I Crew Nightmare

Please Zakleo don't be so against players, everyone makes faults

Jonesie

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Win!

1 of the best levels I ever saw. Amazing art, great minis! I enjoyed it a lot!
Keep up the great work guys!

Last edited by Jonesie (May 20 2012 1:40:40 pm)

Deetz

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

It's amazing what some well-placed blocks can do. The art flowed perfectly, and the minis that I actually did complete (the first 2) were spectacular. I applaud you for this amazing work of art.

~Omri~

Guest

Re: I Crew Nightmare

Ha i won it !
jonesie you didnt wait >:(
but i fowgivez you

Zakleo

Guest

Re: I Crew Nightmare

Thank you Deetz

Vyvo

Guest

Re: I Crew Nightmare

Zakleo was first, but thanks for such a positive feedback Deetz

Last edited by Vyvo (May 20 2012 2:00:00 pm)

Zakleo

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

I was first? First at what? 0_o

Vyvo

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

saying thanks to deetz

to everyone we only got 6 winners yet!

Pyromaniac

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,868

Re: I Crew Nightmare

I quit.. the minis were too annoying imo.

But the art was beautiful.. the only things i would change are the weird worm thing, and the trees (maybe make the straight one less akward looking). Also, I would change the fire.. Fire is more flowing than that, it doesn't just have a definite form like you guys made it.

10/10 for art.

Minis on the other hand.. Now before i say anything i am NOT a minimaker..

BUT, I felt that they, at least the ones I played, were just plain annoying. It was too easy to fall, and some were just random arrows everywhere. Some I couldn't even see what I was supposed to do until three or four times of falling back.

Idk, overall a decent level, the art.. the art was stunning.. Now just work on the minis

Vyvo

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Hytres1 Thank you for playing the level! you are the 8th winner of this level!

Last edited by Vyvo (May 21 2012 3:32:18 am)

hytres1

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Re: I Crew Nightmare

Hytres1 Thank you for playing the level! you are the 7th winner of this level!

Thanks

And thanks to return me in the mini that I was. There's a little bug, but you fixed it

I really fun playing the world.

The art is very very awesome and the minis are very good

OrangeCrix

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Joined: 2015-03-01

Posts: 266

Re: I Crew Nightmare

Hytres1 Thank you for playing the level! you are the 7th winner of this level!

You lost count, I believe that I was the seventh winner.