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Shy Guy

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Re: MG Crew's Tower of Terror!

It's late, I'll play it later, but I see two problems with the art:

> WAY too much text.

I'd put the MG Crew logo in the corner and erase everything else. Honestly, I could care less about who else won and where the win area is. The title of the level is about two inches away, I don't think it's too difficult to move your eyes that far to see it. I think of text like putting bumper stickers on your car. It doesn't fit in and nobody really cares. Just some friendly advice.

> The boat is bigger then the tree, lol.

If you did my earlier suggestion, you could easily just make the island bigger and leave the boat where it is. Maybe have the trunk of the palm tree not visible, and just the leaves coming out of the side. Or, instead of a deserted island with one tree, fill it with trees and green stuff. Mmmm, chlorophyll.

Quite possible the island is farther away causing it to be smaller than the boat.

I don't think there would be an island of freedom next to a tower of doom

I aimed to make the island farther away actually lol

And like I said. This map was started way back, so I don't think my the Room had all the info on it. So I put the text there

D-rock2308

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Re: MG Crew's Tower of Terror!

I think you should delete Guest-111 from win list. That means absolutely nothing.

Shy Guy

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Re: MG Crew's Tower of Terror!

I think you should delete Guest-111 from win list. That means absolutely nothing.

I did and I fixed the exploits johan and supadorf pointed out.

Tako

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From: Memphis, Tennessee, USA

Joined: 2015-08-10

Posts: 6,663

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Re: MG Crew's Tower of Terror!

Meh. Depth.

For EE landscapes, it's best to stick to foreground or background. If you want the island in the background, make the boat smaller. If you want the island in the foreground, make the island bigger.

Like I said, since the two are so close together it looks like the boat is bigger then the tree.

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Yeah, well, you know that's just like, uh, your opinion, man.

Cyclopsicle

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Re: MG Crew's Tower of Terror!

Bumpity Bump Bump...

Shy Guy

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Re: MG Crew's Tower of Terror!

It wasn't necessary to bump the topic, but whatever floats your boat.

Master1

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From: Crait

Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 4,452

Re: MG Crew's Tower of Terror!

I finished all gold coins and blue coins

I found the level pretty easy actually, well... except for the dozens of times i felt the rage coming on xD

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