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Do you think I could just leave this part blank and it'd be okay? We're just going to replace the whole thing with a header image anyway, right?

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#26 Before February 2015

DKZero
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Re: Art level (beta)

Wow!
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#27 Before February 2015

Phenomenon
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Re: Art level (beta)

Since your art is really great here, I'll give some feedback on stuff that you may want to change ;3
The first thing is the standing of the sun with the shade it gives. When I look at your level (I don't know it is some sort of illusion) it looks like the sun is behind the mountains, if so there wouldn't be any reflection of it in the water, this is because it in the shade of the mountain.

If still want to use the water for any thing art-wise, I'd make the mountain reflect. Not that it's wrong or something, but it would come out better then the sun now (if the sun is in the right position).

Then something about the ending of the mountain to the water. It's to suddenly, it's like mountain -> water, but in reality there is always a short visible darker line that keeps the water and the land apart.

Trees. That tree on the mid-left is very well done, I think you should keep that style into the other trees too.

Don't take my criticism to hard, your level is perfect as it is <3

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