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#1 2017-11-14 22:39:05

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Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

I am showing you my Turkey smiley. Don't judge, it's my first time spriting.

image.ibb.co/mVmHNm/Turkey.png

What should I improve?


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#2 2017-11-14 22:42:53

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

for anyone who was wondering, this is what it looks like Turkey.png




you tried

#3 2017-11-14 22:55:10

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

zyhrllos wrote:

you tried

you could at least give constructive criticism since you make art


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#4 2017-11-14 23:30:21

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

Not bad for a first smiley graphic but it's not really an "Everybody Edits" smiley.

  • The body is too flat, you only used one brown solid color.

  • Where's the smiley border?

  • The eyes and nose are too small.

  • The most smileys just have black dots as eyes.

  • Smileys don't have legs.

  • The tail feathers aren't really realistic (also very flat).

It's better to make a new one instead of improving it.

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#5 2017-11-14 23:52:12

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

Xfrogman43 wrote:
zyhrllos wrote:

you tried

you could at least give constructive criticism since you make art

but then people will have a better chance at overcoming him in making art!


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#6 2017-11-15 00:11:36

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

Xfrogman43 wrote:
zyhrllos wrote:

you tried

you could at least give constructive criticism since you make art

i cant give constructive criticism based on ee standards because this doesnt look like it was made for ee

#7 2017-11-15 00:35:48

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

zyhrllos wrote:
Xfrogman43 wrote:
zyhrllos wrote:

you tried

you could at least give constructive criticism since you make art

i cant give constructive criticism based on ee standards because this doesnt look like it was made for ee

damn that sounds smart


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#8 2017-11-15 01:03:56

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

maxi123 wrote:
zyhrllos wrote:
Xfrogman43 wrote:
zyhrllos wrote:

you tried

you could at least give constructive criticism since you make art

i cant give constructive criticism based on ee standards because this doesnt look like it was made for ee

damn that sounds smart

ok well if you expect me to criticize art that isnt initially made for ee within the ee community then you better rethink your standards

besides, should you be "dealing with anger"?

#9 2017-11-15 04:31:03, last edited by Joeyc (2017-11-15 04:31:45)

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

It's his first time spriting, he/she is learning, give them a break. Also it's considered an "Idea" EE could think of. You know, just for a week or 2 during Thanksgiving?

#10 2017-11-15 22:56:15

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

Joeyc wrote:

It's his first time spriting, he/she is learning, give them a break. Also it's considered an "Idea" EE could think of. You know, just for a week or 2 during Thanksgiving?

???

#11 2017-11-15 22:59:56, last edited by N1KF (2017-11-15 23:00:52)

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Re: Turkey Smiley - Thanksgiving

zyhrllos wrote:
Joeyc wrote:

It's his first time spriting, he/she is learning, give them a break. Also it's considered an "Idea" EE could think of. You know, just for a week or 2 during Thanksgiving?

???

It's Electric Programmer's first time making sprites; he or she is learning, so give them a break. Also, it's considered an "idea" EE could use. You know, just for a week or two around Thanksgiving?

I think that's what Joeyc meant to say.

Also, Joeyc, I'm confused as to why you refer to Electric Programmer as he, he/she, and they.


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