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Do you think I could just leave this part blank and it'd be okay? We're just going to replace the whole thing with a header image anyway, right?

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#1 2016-07-06 19:54:34, last edited by jonhvictor2004sonic (2016-07-06 21:49:49)

jonhvictor2004sonic
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From: An bra in Brazil
Joined: 2015-12-05
Posts: 444

Summer Run

YAS I FINISHED IT
There you go the world for the summer thing.

Keep in mind that i'm not a guy that knows how to come up with a creative story.


tfw wen u made another account just because you forgot your pass

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#2 2016-07-06 20:21:17

Sensei1
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Re: Summer Run

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I got stuck here, I got to the top ladder but wasn't able to figure out how to get to the ground...
I was only able to play the beginning so there's not much I can say about the world, but I think the invisible dots/blocks at the beginning could have worked better if they were visible. I liked the art!

PS. I think you did the url thing wrong

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#3 2016-07-06 21:51:43, last edited by jonhvictor2004sonic (2016-07-06 22:04:20)

jonhvictor2004sonic
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Re: Summer Run

Sensei1 wrote:

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Fixed! and thanks for the positive review about my art! //forums.everybodyedits.com/img/smilies/big_smile


tfw wen u made another account just because you forgot your pass

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#4 2016-07-06 22:58:20

Koya
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Re: Summer Run

TOOP wrote:

-Poor usage of invisible blocks hurts the gameplay. Example: Just because you know where the barriers are doesn't mean players will.


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