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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=77DBsnKGSiE

doctorew: Alright Mr Shoe, here?s your prescription, and you?ll want to take that twice daily.

Mr Shoe: Thank you, doctor. I feel much better now.

doctorew: Anytime.

Mr Shoe: as he walks outside Hmm, I wonder what I should do now.

Mr Shoe: I guess I?ll check on the game.

Chapter 7 ? Briefly Back on Track

www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NO61zkn1vc

MIHB: Ugh?What?What..happened..?

Processor: We were flying in a snowball down the hill until we crashed into?

Toby: Wait a second, hey look, it?s?

Cyclone: Urg?..where a-

Toby: CYCLONE!

Cyclone: TOBY!

The two got up and enhanced in a bromantical hug.

AndreiTan: Right?

SquadFS: Hooray! We?ve found the rest of the group!

MIHB: We did, but it doesn?t seem like everyone.

ALEXTHEMENTALONE: Still, our chances of finding them seem very slim. We?re not even sure if they landed even near the same place as us.

GottaAskTheMan: from a distance Hey! Look! It?s Shiny, MIHB, and everybody else!

ALEXTHEMENTALONE: I stand corrected.

Just then, the group who had almost drown in the ocean found the group who had crashed in the forest.

DarkStar32: Yes! We?ve found you all!

Chris: Toby! Cyclone!

Toby & Cyclone: CHRIS!

SBeam: Well, well, well, what wonderful timing! We were just about to start searching for you guys after we heard a crash.

Rurigok: Yes, what was that?

Arceus64: It is a long story that we will explain another time.

Supershadow30: He is correct. We need to focus on finding everyone else.

Sharkguy123: What are you talking about? Didn?t we just find everybody?

FailGirl101: We did, just we didn?t find all of them.

GirlforGod2000: Great. Just wonderful. Now what are we going to do?

Fdoou: I wouldn?t worry. With our luck of finding this much of our clan, and the increased size of our pack, it shouldn?t be too long until we find the rest.

Different55: So, I presume that we?ll find them by just wandering around like before?

DarknessPr0ject: As unlikely as it seems, that seems to be our only choice.

hummerz5: Well, we aren?t going to get anything done by just sitting around and waiting for them.

Onepiece88: Right, then, let?s go.

The players started their walk through the forest in search of the rest of the players.

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Meanwhile, in the underground area?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQs9vVdLsK8
SQUASH

Aoitenshi: AHA! TAKE THAT YOU FOOLS!

STOMP

Aoitenshi: IT DOESN?T FEEL TOO GOOD TO BE STEPPED ON, NOW DOES IT?

GravityFractal: Wow. He sure is full of himself.

doh: Indeed.

GravityFractal: Hey, Aoitenshi, ya havin? a fun time over there?

Aoitenshi: ignores Gravity DIE YOU FOOLS! DIE! >:D

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8ukcO_Oc8s

Aoitenshi: AH! CRAP!

Aoitenshi walked back over to everyone else.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7rxryk1_ho

RPGMASTER2000: How did it go?

Aoitenshi: Well, one guy thought it would be a good idea to touch me and decrease my power.*

Aoitenshi: And, well, you can say he didn?t have a very happy ending after that.

RPGMASTER2000: Right, so anyways, how are we going to get out of here?

rocktheworld313: Hold up, does anybody see that over there?

doh: Where?

rocktheworld313: Right there. It?s another pipe.

Aoitenshi: It is. Do you think we should go in it?

GravityFractal: It doesn?t look like we have much of a choice.

ShadowF0XX: I?m willing to take my chances.

ShadowF0XX jumped into the pipe.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q8ukcO_Oc8s

RPGMASTER2000: Although we have no idea where this is taking us, it seems like it?s our only choice.

GravityFractal: Let?s just go. At least there?s a chance we could find them.

Everyone else hopped into the pipe.

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Back in the forest?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZsfkxOSfCos

Toby: We?ve been walking pretty fa-

some_man: What did I say earlier?

clunk

Arceus64: What was that?

SuperXSuper: What?s wrong Arceus?

Arceus64: I could have sworn I felt something shake under me.

clunk

BEE: I felt it this time.

SuperXSuper: I did too, what is that?

clunk

BuzzerBee: Okay, what?s going on-

Just then, a warp pipe erupted from the ground interrupting BuzzerBee.

Arceus64: What the heck?

VERRUP

ShadowF0XX stepped out from the pipe.

ShadowF0XX: Woah, uh?

Everyone else from the underground started stepping out while the ones in the forest watched intently.

RPGMASTER2000: Hey, Chris, Cyclone and Toby! Shadow was right!

GravityFractal: Whoopee!

TakoMan02: Where did you all come from?

doh: We got lost in an underground maze.

ShinyPorygon5: Me and some others were lost in the mountains.

Toby: Me and the rest got lost in the forest.

Aoitenshi: How did you all find each other?

Chris: We should probably explain that later, since we have more important things to tend too such as an alien virus trying to take over our world.

SBeam: Speaking of which, has anyone thought of what our destination is?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zCNgvZxod0

Suddenly Highfive55 started to stare off into the distance.

krubby: HF, what?s wrong?

krubby started staring as well, to be followed shortly afterward by the rest of the group.

Helvi: What in the name of?

Sharkguy123: What is that?

SquadFS: THAT probably answers your questions.

SBeam: I still didn?t think there would be something like that?

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END OF CHAPTER 7

What did the heroes see in the distance? Find out in the next exciting episode of?
A DARK STORY!
Hey everybody, I just wanted everyone to know that I tried to make this one of the longer chapters, and I also tried to push all of the characters back together so we could get to move on out of the island. Anyways, as always, I hope you liked this chapter! ~SP5

Arceus64

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Two questions:

1. What does the asterisk here mean?

Aoitenshi: Well, one guy thought it would be a good idea to touch me and decrease my power.*

2. Which smiley represents me?

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Two questions:

1. What does the asterisk here mean?

Aoitenshi: Well, one guy thought it would be a good idea to touch me and decrease my power.*

2. Which smiley represents me?

1. It's called a typo. 2. Anyone you want it to be.

kooldude9000

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

That is actually really good, I just read all of it and it is awesome. I like the animations by echo in the smiley battle. And the balloon, WOW! Who actually said the picture of the balloon?

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

That is actually really good, I just read all of it and it is awesome. I like the animations by echo in the smiley battle. And the balloon, WOW! Who actually said the picture of the balloon?

Thanks, but, "who actually said the picture of the balloon?". What do you mean?

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 8 ? Diving into Dark Castle

www.youtube.com/watch?v=jo0OgjL2m04

SBeam: It appears to be a castle.

Arceus64: With a big, scary, dark tornado over it! :,,,,(((((

Chris: And, it?s somehow sitting on top of the clouds.

GottaAskTheMan: What could it be?

SBeam: snap I think I?ve got it.

ayushman: What?

SBeam: This castle, it?s contains the core of the darkness, and that?s what is emitting that large, dark vortex.

Theeditor: Wasn?t our original mission before to destroy it?

AndreiTan: It was.

Theeditor: How will we get there though? Smilies can?t fly, and we can?t get god mode here.

MIHB: Levitation potion?

SquadFS: No, that won?t last long enough.

Toby: Why don?t we just build something? We?re all good at doing that.

ALEXTHEMENTALONE: He?s got a point?

Sharkguy123: Well, in that case, let?s start!

So, in about 10 minutes or so, the players finally finished their aircraft.

Chris: Okay guys, what do you think?

skullz17: I think it?s lovely!

FailGirl101: It?s better than nothing?>.>

Echo!: Well, I think it?s about time we take this baby out for a test drive, what do you think?

Xfrogman43: Let?sa go!

Everyone entered on the aircraft

Fdoou: Okay, let?s call this space stuff!

Chris: Fair enough.

SquadFS: SO MUCH TECHNOLOGY

DarkStar32: So, SBeam, how do we start this thing up?

SBeam: Hold on, I have to see if everyone is ready.

YA?LL READEH?

?YA?

SBeam: Okay, so we just press this little button here, and?

VROOM!

The space stuff had created a loud roar and started levitating.

DarknessPr0ject: Okay, here we go!

SBeam pulled a lever and the space stuff started driving.

SBeam: Next destination! Dark Castle!

Various Players: Woo hoo! Yeah! Alright!

Chris: How long will the trip be SBeam?

SBeam: Hmm, about an hour.

Chris: Alright, it gives us just a good amount of time for a plan.

BEE: Plan?

Chris: Yeah, to take out the darkness.

GottaAskTheMan: Alright, what is it?

Chris explained the plan to everyone.

Chris: Alright, everyone got it?

Everyone: Yep!

Toby: SBeam, how close are we to the castle?

SBeam: 30 minutes more!

ILikeNoah: When are we going to-

BOOM!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNAmyydSGX0

Suddenly, the ship started rocking back and forth very violently.

Different55: Woah!

Sharkguy123: Ahh!

GirlforGod2000: Eek!

Cyclone: Yo, what?s going on out there?

SBeam: It appears we?ve been struck by some flying object!

Cola1: What!?

BANG!

Everyone: Wah!

Monshraider: Holy crap, what?s going on out there?

CRASH!

SBeam: Here, everyone look on the outside monitor!

Cyclopsicle: O_O

Rurigok: GET OUT OF THE WAY!

BAM!

Fdoou: We?re all gonna die!

Bill33: AHH!

Chris: Everyone, calm down! If we can just move out of the cannon?s range, we won?t have to worry about anything!

Chris: SBeam?

SBeam: Already on it.

The ship made a huge turn, dodging most of the missiles, and then started going up higher into the sky.

Toby: I can see Dark Castle faintly!

Chris: Okay everybody, this is where the plan comes into action!

Chris handed Mr Void, sensei1, Arceus64, Bass5098, and Helvi a potion of levitation.

Chris: Now go! GO!

Chris pressed the key letting the players out.

Helvi: WEWT LETS FLY

Mr Void: Dark Castle is in sight! Activate potions of levitation!

Everyone in the air used their potions of levitation.

Arceus64: Alright, let?s crash this party!

Meanwhile, at the castle front?

???: Hmm, I see distant figures on the horizon?

???: All troops on deck! I repeat! All troops on deck! This is not a drill!

Guest ? 76: Sir, what are your orders?

???: Neutralize the large aircraft, and then fire at the airborne figures coming toward us.

Guest ? 76: Yes sir!

???: And if that fails, ignite the darkness bomb near their landing.

???: Show no mercy?

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Another chapter in one day?!?!? :OOOO

Yep. There was. Just don?t be expecting this too often.

A note to some of you people out there, make sure to read from chapter 1 to the last chapter or it won?t make sense.

Hopefully you all can see that we?re getting close to the climax of the story.

Last edited by ShinyPorygon5 (May 17 2013 10:11:56 am)

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

A ?Dark? Story ? Unused Scene: Mario Appears

Highfive55: Okay, don?t get too riled up pal, we?re right next to a cliff and could fall off any seco-

josefeliasson:

JJ!
SquadFS: Woah!

Suddenly, the crazed josefeliasson had pushed everyone off the cliff.

?

Meanwhile, in the distance?

Mario: Hmm?

Mario: Mama Mia!

The snowball started to come towards Mario!

Mario: Eek! Let?sa go!

BONK!

SquadFS: Wah!

Then, the snowball went flying and landed in the side of the mountain.

ShinyPorygon5: Ugh?now what?

Mario: Hmm?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-B6zj4jQJH4

Mario walked over to the snowball, er, what was left of it.

Cyclone: What the?who are you?

Mario: gibberish that sounds italian

Cyclone: Mario?

Processor: Never heard of ya.

Arceus64: If I may ask, Mario, have you seen other smilies that look like us? We?re looking for our friends.

Mario: Oh! Yeah!

Onepiece88: Where?

Mario: more gibberish that sounds italian

Sharkguy123: So, in the forest?

Mario: nods head Mhm!

Sharkguy123: Okay! Thank you!

Mario: Buh-Bye!

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They then shortly after found the others in the forest. This wasn?t what actually happened, but people just wanted to see Mario in the series so I decided to do this.

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 9 ? Flight Fights

www.youtube.com/watch?v=LrfjWUizb94

Arceus64: WAH! WAH! WAH! WAH!

Arceus64 started to sweep through the guests by flailing his arms around while running.

Mr Void started to run on top of a rolling guest, which he steered around smashing into many others.

Helvi: Good thing I brought this.

Helvi consumed the potion?s contents.

Helvi: YAH!

Then, he sprang into the air.

Afterward, he came crashing down and landed on top of Guest ? 746, then bounced off of him, and kept bouncing from head to head until he crashed onto the ground.

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Meanwhile, higher up in the Space Stuff?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=T4D83hGJyP0

SBeam: Chris, I don?t see any landing spaces. They?re all full of possessed guests.

Chris: Wait until everyone on the bottom pounds through a crowd, and then land there.

SBeam: Got it.

SHA-BOOM!

Cola1: Gah! Now what?

SuperXSuper: SBeam, open the monitor.

SBeam: Here, take a look.

Everyone looked at the monitor, to see that the darkness forces had aircrafts of their own, and were showing a monitor of one of the generals on it!

General ? Maxi: FREEZE! NO AIR CRAFTS ARE ALLOWED IN THIS PART OF THE SKY! THIS IS DARKNESS TERRITORY!

GravityFractal: I?ll do the talking.

Gravity opened the monitor and it showed his face.

GravityFractal: Hello there, mister darkness commander guy!

General ? Maxi: YOU THERE, YOU MUST TAKE YOUR SHIP AND LEAVE NOW!

GravityFractal: Well, uhh, I?m afraid we not gonna do that.

General ? Maxi: IF YOU DO NOT FOLLOW MY RULES, I?M AFRAID WE?LL HAVE TO RESORT TO BRUTE FORCE!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=SyGA5iZukZ0

GravityFractal: Woah, woah, now, I?m sure we can work something out.

General ? Maxi: YOU HAVE ONE MINUTE.

GravityFractal: Okay, okay! Well, this is our planet, and we understand that you all are trying to take over it, so, could you please tell your leader to cancel your mission?

General ? Maxi: THIS PLANET IS OUR PROPERTY NOW, AND NO ONE WILL MAKE ANY EXCEPTION TO IT!

GravityFractal: Oh, okay, in that case I guess that we?ll just go back and- SBEAM ACCELERATE AND TURN AROUND THEM!

Space Stuff:

VERRROOOOMMM!
SBeam pulled a lever, and the Space Stuff went right around the other enemy ships.

General ? Maxi: AFTER THEM! ATTACK! DON?T LET THEM GET AWAY!

FailGirl101: You?re never doing the talking again.

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Back inside the castle?

www.youtube.com/watch?v=NxehkFTeGWw

???: Are they being exterminated?

Guest ? 76: Sir, they?re taking out most of our troops with ease!

???: Hmm?Alright. Send out the darkness bomb, and then I shall come deal with them in person.

Guest ? 76: Yes, commander Obscurum!

Commander ? Obscurum: Hmph.

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END OF CHAPTER 9

Hope you liked.

kooldude9000

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

That is actually really good, I just read all of it and it is awesome. I like the animations by echo in the smiley battle. And the balloon, WOW! Who actually said the picture of the balloon?

Thanks, but, "who actually said the picture of the balloon?". What do you mean?

When someone said a picture of a balloon to prevent everyone getting bored, WHO SAID TEH BALLOON?!

N1KF

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Wow, this story is great. If there were 1,000 chapters like this, I would read them all.

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

That is actually really good, I just read all of it and it is awesome. I like the animations by echo in the smiley battle. And the balloon, WOW! Who actually said the picture of the balloon?

Thanks, but, "who actually said the picture of the balloon?". What do you mean?

When someone said a picture of a balloon to prevent everyone getting bored, WHO SAID TEH BALLOON?!

I still don't know what you mean. I think Master1 said it? It's a picture, Master1 just showed it to them, nobody can say a picture. I'm not sure what kind of quantum physics you're getting into?

Number(1)KirbyFan10
Wow, this story is great. If there were 1,000 chapters like this, I would read them all.

kooldude9000

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

You know what I meant. ¬_¬
Saying and Showing, It's all the same.

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

You know what I meant. ¬_¬
Saying and Showing, It's all the same.

So did I answer your question?

kooldude9000

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Sort of...
Anywayz, Next chapter will be *insert time of next chapter here* ?

rocktheworld313

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

So many music soundtracks! SO MANY!

Wish it took longer to get to the climax, this is a bit fast.

ShinyPorygon5

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Chapter 10 ? Damaging Duels

sensei1: Over there, it looks like it?s the entrance to the castle.

Bass5098: Alright, let?s go.

Halt!

Helvi: Huh?

Guest ? 76: You are prohibited from going any further!

Arceus64: Says who? You?re just another guest.

Guest ? 76: I am, but, I?ve brought a secret weapon with me! Guys, bring it in!

Three other guests brought in a large circular object which appeared to be a bomb.

sensei1: O_O Uhh, what are you going to do with that?

Guest ? 76: Oh, you?ll see.

Bass5098: Crap! Everybody run!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=_hQzTkv_hck

SMACK!

Mr Void: Huh?

SMACK!

Two gates smacked down blocking the players exit!

Guest ? 76: Have fun.

Helvi: Wait, what?s going to happen to us?

Guest ? 76: Oh, you know, you?ll just become possessed by the dark power and be loyal to us forever.*

Arceus64: Are you insane? You?ll be blown up too!

Guest ? 76: Don?t worry, that radiation won?t get through that glass.

Arceus64: Shoot!

Guest ? 76: Now, if you?ll excuse me, I?ll be going to go take out the rest of your friends.

Mr Void: Wait! You can?t do this!

Guest ? 76: Sorry! General Obscurum?s orders. Bye!

Bass5098: Wait! NOOO!

Bomb: Tsss?.

Arceus64: I don?t wanna die! D,:

Bomb: Tsss?.

Helvi: This looks like the end?

Bomb: Tsss?.

Mr Void: Although I wasn?t a moderator for very long, I just wanted you all to know that I thought this game was pretty fun.

Bomb: TSSSSSS

sensei1: Goodbye everyone?. :?(

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www.youtube.com/watch?v=5qwjJ9MCjcw

[img]s23.postimg.org/a9ya5d2bv/fffff.png[/img](Bad editing, I know.)

ZOOM!

A missile flew right past the ship.

General ? Maxi: DIE!

GravityFractal: Wah! SBeam, can?t you go any faster?

SBeam: I?ll try, but you guys should try and fight off the guests that are being impaled onto our ship.

rocktheworld313: Wait what?

Guest ? 496: Let us in!

kooldude9000: Agh, let?s go get them!

Everyone opened the door and went out on the back deck.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=KXZtU0U5gWY

GirlforGod2000: Hi-yah! Take that!

Toby: Woah!

Toby almost fell off of the ship.

Toby: Hah, that was close.

Nou: Okay, we?ve got all of them off the ship.

SBeam: That took off some of the weight, I?ll speed the ship up now.

VROOM!

The Space Stuff went blasting off.

General ? Maxi: AFTER THEM YOU SLACKERS! THEY?RE GETTING AWAY!

General ? Maxi and the rest of the remaining guests flew off in pursuit of the other players.

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Commander ? Obscurum: over the radio Have you caught them?

Guest ? 76: Yes sir! We caught them in between the walls, and placed the darkness bomb in there!

Commander ? Obscurum: Good?good?if you keep this up, you may get a raise.

Guest -76: Oh boy!

Commander ? Obscurum: shuts off transceiver Now, I?ll have to contact General ? Maxi and see how his progress with the other twerps is going.

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Oh boy! Chapter 10! Hope you had fun reading it and liked it. Again.

Last edited by ShinyPorygon5 (Jun 7 2013 5:16:53 pm)

kooldude9000

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

I had fun reading it and I did enjoy it, shame they didn't get blown up though
I could've replaced those blown up. But anyway yeah great job and can't wait for
Chapter 11 !

Atikyne

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Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 1,113

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Great story! May I be in it?

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Kentiya / Atikyne — EE & EEU lead artist 2018-2020

kooldude9000

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Great story! May I be in it?

I forgot to ask...                                         ^
But that ______________________|

skullz17

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Posts: 6,699

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Yay new chapters. I was like 5 chapters behind lol. I'll follow this more now.

Oh and great story.

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thx for sig bobithan

Atikyne

Formerly Kentiya

From: United States

Joined: 2015-02-16

Posts: 1,113

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Great story! May I be in it?

I forgot to ask...                                         ^
But that ______________________|

You are in it. (At least in Chapter 10.)

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Kentiya / Atikyne — EE & EEU lead artist 2018-2020

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

Great story! May I be in it?

Thanks, and sure you can.

Arceus64

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

s23.postimg.org/a9ya5d2bv/fffff.png

You forgot your image tag.

I really hope I get to die. Can you incorporate that?

Last edited by Arceus64 (May 19 2013 4:19:14 pm)

ShinyPorygon5

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Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

s23.postimg.org/a9ya5d2bv/fffff.png

You forgot your image tag.

I really hope I get to die. Can you incorporate that?

Why would you want to die?

Arceus64

Guest

Re: A "Dark" Story [ILLUSTRATATED]

s23.postimg.org/a9ya5d2bv/fffff.png

You forgot your image tag.

I really hope I get to die. Can you incorporate that?

Why would you want to die?

EXCITEMENT!