Vol. 1 ABVE - EE Epic Story (Final Chapter - Day Eight, Segment Two)

Creature · Before February 2015

ipwner wrote:

ipwner wrote:
Biased character selection. Same people, lame people. It gets a little tiring having to read stories about the same lame boring peeps time after time after time. Add a little more cultural variety. These people do not represent EE. Where's the average player? "Where is that demographic of people who talk like this and are really good."? (Nezum, Tiralmo, etc.). Where are the Kongregatefails (Terrence22205, Icebomb, ShinyPorygon5, etc.)? Where are teh art folks who are good but not really that recognized (Toxic, etc.) Where's the ipwner (ipwner, ipwner, etc.)? How bout the fdoouzle and the kirby and the mrsflame to add up a spice of personality? Swap out the characters or add in alot of new ones or else this may crash and burn in flame. Just my advice.
The new characters you added are still just the "proepicalz" and no one interesting, plus you and your freends..

I hope there will be lot and lot of characters, soon me or you will appear then die, and soon tak4n will have no idea for character.

Arceus64 · Before February 2015

I have a strong feeling nobody posting here is actually reading the story, but instead is just beating a dead horse by repeating comments that are offering no real constructive criticism.
For your question, tak4n, I'd say MrShoe or some other administrator.

Last edited by Arceus64 (Jun 27 2014 1:46:31 pm)

Fdoou · Before February 2015

what reason do we have to read the story, just read ATTWO, it's the same characters, just done better

Last edited by Fdoou (Jun 27 2014 1:49:24 pm)

Anch · Before February 2015

Come on tak4n put a lot of time into this.

tak4n · Before February 2015

I understand all of you guys, the characters I will add over time should satisfy a lot of you, however you need to give them time. Again, the reason I add my friends into the story over people I don't know much is because I know their actions and dialogue a bit better. Other characters I will add will be based off of their names, meaning that one person might have the name that fits the team. Then, I cannot add people I don't know because I simply don't know them or never seen their name before.

I agree M1 is probably better at writing stories and developing a plot. I only began my story though, it's only been two days (In the story), I have the ideas to try and make it work. Give it time to develop.

Creature · Before February 2015

tak4n wrote:

I understand all of you guys, the characters I will add over time should satisfy a lot of you, however you need to give them time. Again, the reason I add my friends into the story over people I don't know much is because I know their actions and dialogue a bit better. Other characters I will add will be based off of their names, meaning that one person might have the name that fits the team. Then, I cannot add people I don't know because I simply don't know them or never seen their name before.
I agree M1 is probably better at writing stories and developing a plot. I only began my story though, it's only been two days (In the story), I have the ideas to try and make it work. Give it time to develop.

What information about me you need?

Fdoou · Before February 2015

make personalities.
(hint hint, a shared account is a good template)

Creature · Before February 2015

Fdoou wrote:

make personalities.
(hint hint, a shared account is a good template)

Can you say all the shared accounts you know to him?

tak4n · Before February 2015

Creature wrote:

Fdoou wrote:
make personalities.
(hint hint, a shared account is a good template)
Can you say all the shared accounts you know to him?

If I'll need shared accounts I can use his shared account history page he posted I am planning to use some in one way or another. I won't spoil anything though.

Creature · Before February 2015

tak4n wrote:

Creature wrote:
Fdoou wrote:
make personalities.
(hint hint, a shared account is a good template)
Can you say all the shared accounts you know to him?
If I'll need shared accounts I can use his shared account history page he posted I am planning to use some in one way or another. I won't spoil anything though.

You don't need, Fdoou will spoil it.

Fdoou · Before February 2015

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, to name a few unbanned ones
I forget harry12345 and djnex

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Master1 · Before February 2015

why am I not an archangel. This is so upsetting :C

tak4n · Before February 2015

Master1 wrote:

why am I not an archangel. This is so upsetting :C

Should have posted this near the start of the story, too much to change at this point. All four teams are awesome though, the name shouldn't matter too much.

I will be updating this topic tomorrow, might do 2 posts one in the morning and one later in the day, if not then I'll do one post in one day and other post the next day.

What to expect in the next 2 posts:
-Improved paragraph structures to make it easier to read.
-Introduction to new characters.
-Development of existing characters.
-Interesting explanations through the prologues.
-And more!

Xfrogman43 · Before February 2015

I killed tak4n..................:3........................... I'm probably going to die soon. :C

tak4n · Before February 2015

Decided to update today, pretty much added more story line and character development. Tomorrow I will post the actual battle which will include new characters and more! Stay tuned for tomorrow's epic battle.

EDIT: I also improved paragraphs to make them smaller and easier to read, thanks for your feedback. It's thanks to you guys that this story is improving.

Last edited by tak4n (Jul 5 2014 4:51:13 am)

Creature · Before February 2015

I still having few difficulties to read, if ill feedback what to better reading here is:

Chapter 1
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Update 2:

Chapter 2
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Update 2:

tak4n · Before February 2015

Creature wrote:

I still having few difficulties to read, if ill feedback what to better reading here is:
Chapter 1
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Update 2:
Chapter 2
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Update 2:

The thing is the day method I am using now actually helps understand when a whole day in the story has passed. E.g. In Day 6 if someone says we will fight in two days, expect them to fight on Day 8.

As to see when a new chapter is up, I started to use the

- - -

That's why I think my current method is very organised, or at least a lot more organised than when I first posted this topic.

tak4n · Before February 2015

Updated the main post. This chapter is a long one so I might post the next one in a couple of days. Main Editions:
-An Epic, Long Battle.
-Story Line Development.
-Character Development.
-New Characters Introduced!
-Now made Chapter # next to every prologue to make it easier to remember where you were up to in reading and where a new chapter begins.

Koto · Before February 2015

There are alot of banned people in this topic.

tak4n · Before February 2015

Updated the story. A bit of a different chapter this time introducing an interesting team. It would be helpful if someone could post every time after I update because I don't want to get into double or triple posting. The sooner someone posts, the sooner I will update. So main editions include:
-Each team has their own theme song now.
-The actual story moving forward with new characters, development, etc.

Hope you enjoy!

Embarrassing · Before February 2015

Posting for next update.
Story-hungry freak.
Good luck! It's pretty interesting so far!

tak4n · Before February 2015

Updated the main post.
So Volume 1 is more than half way finished and I want to discuss the future of this story.
There are going to be 2 volumes, the second volume will come out some time after the first, it will have it's own topic because this one is getting too large. I am not planning to make 10 topics for each volume, that is why I am only going to have 2 volumes.
Volume 2 is somewhat planned, yet I will need to spend time to figure out all the events and such. I will not start planning on it unless I am going to get support from at least one person to start volume 2 by the end of this first one.
I have been thinking on having more than two volumes because there are so many people in EE that I want to add to the story but have no place for them in the upcoming 2 volumes but this will be unlikely so Volume 2 is going to have a somewhat decent ending, decent enough just in case I won't have anymore volumes coming after it.
There are still a lot of cool new characters that are going to come in and out in the 2 volumes that I have planned and some really interesting back stories for them. So stay tuned.

Also tell me if I am updating too fast, I have a feeling some people have trouble catching up.

Anch · Before February 2015

I'm.. not.. in.. the.. story..?? ;'[

tak4n · Before February 2015

I updated the story, there is still plenty of space for a lot more people to be introduced so there is no point to worry yet.

Before February 2015

I guess my username isn't that bad after all.

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