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BEE

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Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Hello all, I will use this thread as my "Art in progress - please give me feedback" thread.

Currently I am working on:

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Nature Scene
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWaUGSwMNVa0I

I would like feedback on:
Everything

If you would like to add minis around my art, I will open it up another time for anyone to come edit.
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Peanut Butter
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/BWzayvFYNIa0I

Well I decided to not do a counter and just do the items on the counter, turned out okay, the sammich was a bit harder than I expected and I dont think I got the colors/shading right sadly. Wondering if I should add anything else or jstu let people add minigames and call it done
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Savannah
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWpsybrHhka0I

Sacrificed a little art this time to allow for minigames to be built around the sky, hopefully this one is fun as it is beautiful.

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Dragon Serpent

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWwRFm4s5ka0I

Friend randomly asked me to whip up a dragon. Did this in a few hours but something is clearly wrong but I cant tell what, meaning that its multiple things. Help?

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Bee & Flower

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/BWehbKInZKa0I

Improved upon a previous flower to add a bee. surprisingly the Bee turned out better than I thought it would so I made it my avatar

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Is a world I made art for for a friend to put in minigames, not particularly something I find to be my best work but I put it up here anyways.

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http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWFY4BiHdfa0I
^ my current project of a grand piano

Last edited by BEE (Feb 23 2011 1:43:49 pm)

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Jeffrey

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

nais :O

EDJ

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

very impressive! Would like to make some minis in it
Keep this birdspecie but it needs some touchups

BEE

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Yes you can make minis in it =P

I think the bird's head is too bug, but every time I try to edit it, it gets so strangely proportionally wrong :s

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Pyromaniac

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

That is really really good. keep up the good work

MIHB

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

I like the bird, but the leaves look kinda of plasticy, like they don't have enough texture.

Xpo20

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Bee got a PM concerning this.

TrappedTime

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

ohai xpo.

That branch where the egg nest lays... It looks weird.
But other than that, EPIC WORK.

Different55

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

VERY good. I really like your nature level.

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BEE

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

I havent finished the branches yet, so no worries if it looks weird. =P

Ill see what I can do about the plastic texture, though that will be a hard one considering my limited colors

Thanks for the feedback guys

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Update: Finished more of the nature level, updated the picture for more feedback

Last edited by BEE (Jan 16 2011 3:04:52 pm)

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Different55

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Forget it looking like plastic. It's epic however it looks.

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D-rock2308

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Hey Bee, You inspired me to make a level sorta like this, only based underwater! A Coral Reef! Here's what I got so far.

BEE

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Very nice DRock, I agree that the wide worlds are great for landscape pictures. Link me that level and Ill come and visit it

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Kaosslasher

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

one word ... HAX!

That is freaking amazing...

D-rock2308

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Very nice DRock, I agree that the wide worlds are great for landscape pictures. Link me that level and Ill come and visit it

Here you go. Have at it!
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWMj-yldBVa0I

BEE

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Dragon Serpent

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWwRFm4s5ka0I

Friend randomly asked me to whip up a dragon. Did this in a few hours but something is clearly wrong but I cant tell what, meaning that its multiple things. Help? :s

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D-rock2308

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Dragon Serpent
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/5065 … dragon.png

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PWwRFm4s5ka0I

Friend randomly asked me to whip up a dragon. Did this in a few hours but something is clearly wrong but I cant tell what, meaning that its multiple things. Help? :s

He might need wings. Also his eye looks a bit off.

Y0shii

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

great art!

BEE

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

He might need wings. Also his eye looks a bit off.

As you found out with the turtle, I fail at eyes lol

Someone write an eye tutorial please :3

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Y0shii

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

eyes look great in my opinion, but your the pro so ima go withyour judjement.

Wild Boar 1101

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

99.9999% chance my eyes will speak the word "crap" in the next 5 seconds

MnM

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Nature scene is really cool but its a little hard to get back up once you fall down.

Y0shii

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

mnm has a point i fell but i did manage to get back up,but stil had a few challenges
overall great map.

BEE

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

Is   my latest picture/improvement

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bloo47

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Re: Looking for Feedback on Art Please

what's code?