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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

This side comment is irrelevant to the topic, but I have a good feeling the two posters above me are the same person.

Mini Reviews (Sorry for being quite harsh):

ZeldaXD:
Level 1: I can't even get past the first obstacle. Plus, the coins are in annoying spots
Level 2: Very horrible concept. Very bland and dull, the bottom arrows make the level seem not suitable for Shift, and half the area is covered by letters. Surely, you can do better

Aprhodite:
The art is pretty bad. I tried to look past it, but the concept is horrible, and like Zelda's, I can't get past the first obstacle.

No,Aprhodite is my friend ;3
And the first obstacle is nub jump lol

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Fdoou

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

If it's not good, don't submit it.

That's all I can say.

P788

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

This is my submission. The first picture is the Easy version of the level, and the second the Hard version of the level.

Ex Crew Shift Submission Level Link

Enjoy.

EDIT: Missed a place to put a background in the first picture :/, but I updated the Easy version of the level to have it, so don't worry.

Last edited by P788 (May 21 2012 1:59:52 pm)

Deetz

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

http://everybodyedits.com/games/BWlSXaPNs1bEI

Meh I'd say a 5 or 6. Maybe 7.

guynm

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_uqZwRvPBrQ

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWAJSlOgyHa0I

how?

Lin Keui Swampert

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

I took your advice to heart.
This level is not finished aesthetically, but functionally this is my current draft, and I'm putting it in as a test for submission. When it's physically fit for submission, I will make it pretty. The moon and hill were the only things I had put in before I began building, and I made sure that they were both incorporated into the puzzle.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/BWehhjv4xPa0I
http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/BWehhjv4xPa0I

This is the only level I'm putting up so far.
I don't want just feedback from Nou and Mega Lamb, I'd like to know the opinions of anyone who wants to try this level. And yes, this is part of my MLP:FiM level attempts, I will add a Luna silhouette with the aesthetic improvements. Shift needs ponies and I make it my duty to fulfill this need.

Firecrackericebreak

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Joined: 2015-02-15

Posts: 616

Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

OMG I am so sry I didn't save it i'll make it again ,but pro baly by the time your reading this it'll be done.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWhuG8d9g8bEI

I rate it a 7.

Last edited by Firecrackericebreak (May 25 2012 10:27:12 am)

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Lin Keui Swampert

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Check out my level.

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWhuG8d9g8bEI

I rate it a 7.

That's not a Shift level, that's a Boss to Code with the title "Come EX Crew."

swordsman

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW1GQNLAGgbEI

http://beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW1GQNLAGgbEI

I'd say around the 3-5 range.

EDIT: Is the image working for you guys?

Last edited by swordsman (May 24 2012 4:23:50 pm)

Firecrackericebreak

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

No he said no coin doors
LOL

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Bobyy

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

My fault I guess Bee automatically wins because smiley art or boss codes or pixel art doesn't count as real art.

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Deetz

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Wrong topic Bobyy?

Firecrackericebreak

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

LOL Wut

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Arceus64

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Just noticed a small quirk in the gameplay, fixed.

iPwner

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Updated my shift entry again.

Non-beta: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW3OFect9-bEI

Beta: beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW3OFect9-bEI
Hopefully, my efforts have gone into making this more fun. Although, my updates may have made it worse. ;P Anyways, for the better or the worse, there you go! :3 Tell me what you think.

Last edited by ipwner (May 26 2012 5:21:12 pm)

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philipg1

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Hey Nou here is the link:http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW495_YdRhbEI

tzgermska

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Hey Nou here is the link:http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW495_YdRhbEI

nice level philipg1

philipg1

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Thx Germska :-)

Haze123

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Updated my shift entry again.
http://i.imgur.com/dXjXL.png?1

Non-beta: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW3OFect9-bEI

Beta: beta.everybodyedits.com/games/PW3OFect9-bEI
Hopefully, my efforts have gone into making this more fun. Although, my updates may have made it worse. ;P Anyways, for the better or the worse, there you go! :3 Tell me what you think.

Oh dang i was there!

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Firecrackericebreak

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

My new 2nd level is way diffrent.

It has better graphics and it's harder.
Now it's a 7 for real.

Link: http://everybodyedits.com/games/PWPIuj0jpSbEI

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BritishTea

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

I have some levels that aren't quite the right size, but could you judge them so I know how they are and which ones if any to re-size?
http://everybodyedits.com/games/PW0QuvM_lZa0I

Edit: If you are only able to look at 3 levels, you should do Pepsi, Purple Tree, and Two Green Trees. I'm really not sure which ones to pick :3

Last edited by BritishTea (May 30 2012 1:14:54 pm)

Nou

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Reviews:

General message: People, please play your own levels before submitting them. When you've played it a few times, ask yourself: "Was this fun?". If the answer is "no", don't submit them; if you don't think it's fun, I won't think so either and it's just wasting time, and reviewing these levels takes a LOT of time.

Green=accepted
Orange=needs fixing and resubmitting
Red=rejected

Buzzerbee:
It got even worse

FCDH:
Level is empty

Fdoou: For future levels, just delete the old ones to make it easier to see.
Top left: Eyerape, annoying coins.
Top middle: Rather clumsey, smooth it over.
Middle middle: Bottom is very obscure; hard to see what to do.

Master1:
Not too great but good enough. Taken as a 3.

222hockey222:
Accepted with edits as a 4.

Aedan:
Level 1: Random arrow trash.
Level 2: Better than 1, but just no fun :/

Haze123
Top bit seems a bit pointless, plus there's a tightfit. Overall boring.

ipwner:
Annoying to play now. Scrap it and make something else with the multilinear stuff.

Rayoflight:
Concept is cool but annoying to play. You're going too fast for it to play nicely. Cause of this the bottomis very hard/annoying to get to. Fix.

Powerstars:
Thanks for the pokemon link Oh and the level: Eyerape, don't do those backgrounds. Falling in a 1x1 area is luck-based and no fun.

Arceus64:
Level 1: Annoying. No space to move (which you need when it's a race).
Level 2: The top right is pretty annoying because restarting it takes forever. Overall not too bad, but not good enough.

ZeldaXD:
Level 1: Reaaaally annoying. When you get the top coin there's a high chance of failing so you fall back to the beginning.
Level 2: Just AYAG 15. So stolen and it doesn't really belong in Shift

Aphrodite:
No level there.

Jan1234:
Level 1: Accepted as a 1.
Level 2: Just annoying.
Level 3: Concept is ok but execution is poop.Can't get the coin between 4 and 5 without getting stuck. Test your levels pls

P788:
Colour scheme is great, but the gameplay is the same (boring) thing twice. Gameplay is most important.

deetz:
Level 1: Plain annoying.
Level 2: No.

guynm:
Submit a level link please, we can't play videos instead of levels :/

LKS:
I can see you've taken the advice as it's much better than the previous ones, just a few things: Getting the key thing doesn't give any advantage: falling because someone else hits the key is just as fast, so why is it there? The moon bit is easy to fall down and therefore pretty annoying. Still aesthetically pleasing. Good to see improvement, but still needs more

Firecrackericebreak:
Level 1:It's not too bad, just a bit boring. We'll give you the benifit of the doubt and allow you to revise it.
Level 2: Accepted with edits.

Swordsman:
Accepted as a 2.

philipg1:
Two things: 1: Can't reach the levels. 2: Maximum of 3 levels per submission.

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guynm

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Reviews:

General message: People, please play your own levels before submitting them. When you've played it a few times, ask yourself: "Was this fun?". If the answer is "no", don't submit them; if you don't think it's fun, I won't think so either and it's just wasting time, and reviewing these levels takes a LOT of time.

Green=accepted
Orange=needs fixing and resubmitting
Red=rejected

Buzzerbee:
It got even worse

FCDH:
Level is empty

Fdoou: For future levels, just delete the old ones to make it easier to see.
Top left: Eyerape, annoying coins.
Top middle: Rather clumsey, smooth it over.
Middle middle: Bottom is very obscure; hard to see what to do.

Master1:
Not too great but good enough. Taken as a 3.

222hockey222:
Accepted with edits as a 4.

Aedan:
Level 1: Random arrow trash.
Level 2: Better than 1, but just no fun :/

Haze123
Top bit seems a bit pointless, plus there's a tightfit. Overall boring.

ipwner:
Annoying to play now. Scrap it and make something else with the multilinear stuff.

Rayoflight:
Concept is cool but annoying to play. You're going too fast for it to play nicely. Cause of this the bottomis very hard/annoying to get to. Fix.

Powerstars:
Thanks for the pokemon link Oh and the level: Eyerape, don't do those backgrounds. Falling in a 1x1 area is luck-based and no fun.

Arceus64:
Level 1: Annoying. No space to move (which you need when it's a race).
Level 2: The top right is pretty annoying because restarting it takes forever. Overall not too bad, but not good enough.

ZeldaXD:
Level 1: Reaaaally annoying. When you get the top coin there's a high chance of failing so you fall back to the beginning.
Level 2: Just AYAG 15. So stolen and it doesn't really belong in Shift

Aphrodite:
No level there.

Jan1234:
Level 1: Accepted as a 1.
Level 2: Just annoying.
Level 3: Concept is ok but execution is poop.Can't get the coin between 4 and 5 without getting stuck. Test your levels pls

P788:
Colour scheme is great, but the gameplay is the same (boring) thing twice. Gameplay is most important.

deetz:
Level 1: Plain annoying.
Level 2: No.

guynm:
Submit a level link please, we can't play videos instead of levels :/

LKS:
I can see you've taken the advice as it's much better than the previous ones, just a few things: Getting the key thing doesn't give any advantage: falling because someone else hits the key is just as fast, so why is it there? The moon bit is easy to fall down and therefore pretty annoying. Still aesthetically pleasing. Good to see improvement, but still needs more

Firecrackericebreak:
Level 1:It's not too bad, just a bit boring. We'll give you the benifit of the doubt and allow you to revise it.
Level 2: Accepted with edits.

Swordsman:
Accepted as a 2.

philipg1:
Two things: 1: Can't reach the levels. 2: Maximum of 3 levels per submission.

Look again,there is a link...

Fdoou

Banned

Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

I wish I could judge my own levels better...

My goal coming into this was to get 9 levels into shift.

I got 8.

That's good enough for me.   Goodbye.

By the way; I will never delete my old levels.

Last edited by Fdoou (Jun 7 2012 5:43:21 am)

Arceus64

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Re: Make your level for EX Crew Shift - Part 2

Well, I am shocked at how bad I am.

1 for 5

I'm going back to the drawing board.