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#1 2016-12-18 11:21:12, last edited by Kaleb (2016-12-18 11:51:27)

Kaleb
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From: California of America
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Alright give me your thaughts.

https://youtu.be/THkaTYotr4k
What do you think on this song?
I know I know I go off beat at some points but the other takes I took got replaced for some reason lol.

And really listen to the lyrics.

This is a song I recorded at the end of my sophomore year in high school and the beginning of my junior year.

EDIT: if you don't like RnB, Hip Hop, Rap genres of music probably don't listen to it.

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#2 2016-12-18 19:15:59

medeia
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Re: Alright give me your thaughts.

" Thaughts "


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#3 2016-12-18 19:33:50

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Re: Alright give me your thaughts.

It started off nice. And then that piano riff came in which was kind of okay at the beginning but I hated it towards the end. The drums are really cool, probably the best part of the song. I really didn't like the hook. Also, the hook came in too often with the verses feeling too short. The song in general just felt really awkward and not very fulfilling.


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thx for sig bobithan

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#4 2016-12-18 22:00:56

Kaleb
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Re: Alright give me your thaughts.

skullz17 wrote:

It started off nice. And then that piano riff came in which was kind of okay at the beginning but I hated it towards the end. The drums are really cool, probably the best part of the song. I really didn't like the hook. Also, the hook came in too often with the verses feeling too short. The song in general just felt really awkward and not very fulfilling.

Alright, thanks for your feedback @skullz17!

If I make another song I will take these suggestions into affect.

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